My child,
Although you've never felt hunger, loneliness or yet had to let go.
After 9 months of growing to make it into this world
Your mother sheltered all things that can feel harsh
You've done the hardest part and come into our arms
Now so many never-ending nevers can be tested
As you've never felt the rush running free in the wind
Never smelt the breeze bring the rain through the leaves
Never felt lighting & thunder open an eye that couldn't see
Never felt the connection, sharing thoughts openly
Yet to take a ride on the ocean floating in weightlessness of just be
There are so many nevers your be told and feel in your time
Never forget if we didn't, you would never of got this ride
All things in life will just happen, you can choose to get off at any time.
Enjoy every moment and never think I didn't love every second of mine.
Like the sun & moon, the cycle never ends
With all the love in my heart, I place in your hand
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I laid in bed with these rhymes, got up and could not believe the time. 00:11 I felt connected to every word I had said, I am truly at balance within my pen. Not every moment is peaceful and calm but I choose to live by every word that is in my heart, never loosing sight of where I've come from. I gave my life to all from the minute I was born, through these tears of join and pain. I have the tools to make better days!
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A lovely write Dan. Them good vibes still blasting away on all cylinders?!
But not good vibes about abortion - unless one is deformed, etc. Yet who are we that we should decide if an unborn child lives or not?
Thank you, my vibes are definitely enjoying this ride!
Tbh is have to say, we are the creators! We don't get there on our own, so we a free to do all possible imaging outcomes..
Me and my ex wife had an abortion before my son was decided, all things happen for a reason!
Who are we to push our view onto others, they only job we have is to live true to ourselves.
Not followe patterns that are not in touch with our own experiences!
(Sorry if that feels like a rant, just my life)
"You'll never outlive the love in a tear" What a classic line Dan.
You're coming out with some real balls of wisdom mate.
"Who are we to push our view onto others, they only job we have is to live true to ourselves.
Not follow patterns that are not in touch with our own experiences!"
I'm shoving your own stuff back at you because i couldnt put it any better if i tried.
Walking on sunshine!
Is it understood better written your way? Outlive* not out live.
Thank you my friend I actually thought of you and others, plus my own to think of those lines. Together we grow if we used words and not guns or fists!
Always deeply appreciated!
Lovely poem, Dan. Make sure you keep all your poems so your child can one day read them and see what a great father you are.
Thank you my friend, I've been slowly going back through all my work and will try to get my head around publishing a book of it all together. Thank you for the nudge!
Hope your still riding well 😉
Your words show the wonder that is in your life and that wonder will be shown to your child.
As in all life love is the most important and you show that love for your son (and you family) with these beautiful words.
Thank you, I definitely feel an extra shine in my thoughts and rhyme.
Always appreciate your time
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