Acorn Valley

Poetic Dan

I walked out my door and didn't know my floor, it was something that I hadn't seen before.

 

No longer am I were used to be, you can now find me in Acorn Valley.

 

Where nothing is quite the same, you'll hear the wind singing my name.

 

No syllable sound do I belong, like the leaves on a tree I'll hang on

 

Come visit me anytime you need but do make sure you bring your dreams

 

Stand within the naked forest, letting go of any unwanted luggage

 

Know your roots are what brought you here, all is strong with nothing to fear

 

Many doors can be your home but when the mind is lost we always roam

 

Within these worlds that we all live, you'll now find me at number 1 Acorn Valley

 

Dancing and swinging from branch to branch, where nothing is ever the same as it was

 

Mushroom Hill I see in the distance, maybe I'll visit and let you know what I found or see you there rolling around.

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 28th, 2019 01:06
  • Comment from author about the poem: This was ment to go out yesterday but I had to find balance first, I thank a fellow poet for starting Acorn Valley of in my head! Always appreciated much peace and respect
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Comments6

  • orchidee

    Careful with those mushrooms - 'rolling around!' oohh.

    • Poetic Dan

      It's okay my feet haven't touched the ground!

      • orchidee

        They will confuse your vibes! heehee.

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      • Clara

        Oh this is great... The visuals and the words chosen. I really enjoyed reading this.

        ''Many doors can be your home but when the mind is lost we always roam''

        Excellent and very true. I like the sound of this place. Thanks for sharing!

        • Poetic Dan

          It felt really good to do and the picture was taken when looking for a dog a customer lost! I was very shocked to come across it!

          Always appreciate your time

        • Goldfinch60

          Those walks with nature are so meaningful and relaxing. They give you a chance to relax and feel the goodness that is in life and within yourself.

          • Poetic Dan

            Sometimes I go to just see it as I can not be it!

            Always appreciated my friend

          • Laura🌻

            Dan,

            I love the pic and your words that complement it! A beautiful and serene scene along with your sincere thoughts that you’ve shared with us! Let us know what you found on ‘Mushroom Hill’! 🍄

            ~Laura~🌻

            • Poetic Dan

              I most certainly will, I've been there many times but never shared its rhymes 😉

            • Neville

              some very nice touches dear poet...

              • Poetic Dan

                Thank you if felt refreshing to do! Even better when other poets read it too!

              • FredPeyer

                'Stand within the naked forest, letting go of any unwanted luggage'
                I feel like that when standing at the shore looking out over the ocean. I do like your poem PD!

                • Poetic Dan

                  Takes a free soul to know, glad we all can connect of the healing of letting go!

                  Always appreciate your time my friend!



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