I walked out my door and didn't know my floor, it was something that I hadn't seen before.
No longer am I were used to be, you can now find me in Acorn Valley.
Where nothing is quite the same, you'll hear the wind singing my name.
No syllable sound do I belong, like the leaves on a tree I'll hang on
Come visit me anytime you need but do make sure you bring your dreams
Stand within the naked forest, letting go of any unwanted luggage
Know your roots are what brought you here, all is strong with nothing to fear
Many doors can be your home but when the mind is lost we always roam
Within these worlds that we all live, you'll now find me at number 1 Acorn Valley
Dancing and swinging from branch to branch, where nothing is ever the same as it was
Mushroom Hill I see in the distance, maybe I'll visit and let you know what I found or see you there rolling around.
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Author:
Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: This was ment to go out yesterday but I had to find balance first, I thank a fellow poet for starting Acorn Valley of in my head! Always appreciated much peace and respect
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Careful with those mushrooms - 'rolling around!' oohh.
It's okay my feet haven't touched the ground!
They will confuse your vibes! heehee.
When confusion could the mind, mushrooms will help you see the rhymes.... Believe me I know 😉
Oh this is great... The visuals and the words chosen. I really enjoyed reading this.
''Many doors can be your home but when the mind is lost we always roam''
Excellent and very true. I like the sound of this place. Thanks for sharing!
It felt really good to do and the picture was taken when looking for a dog a customer lost! I was very shocked to come across it!
Always appreciate your time
Those walks with nature are so meaningful and relaxing. They give you a chance to relax and feel the goodness that is in life and within yourself.
Sometimes I go to just see it as I can not be it!
Always appreciated my friend
Dan,
I love the pic and your words that complement it! A beautiful and serene scene along with your sincere thoughts that you’ve shared with us! Let us know what you found on ‘Mushroom Hill’! 🍄
~Laura~🌻
I most certainly will, I've been there many times but never shared its rhymes 😉
some very nice touches dear poet...
Thank you if felt refreshing to do! Even better when other poets read it too!
'Stand within the naked forest, letting go of any unwanted luggage'
I feel like that when standing at the shore looking out over the ocean. I do like your poem PD!
Takes a free soul to know, glad we all can connect of the healing of letting go!
Always appreciate your time my friend!
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