Childish Smiles
She
Came to me
With childish smiles
Blue eyes and full of dreams
She
Stole my mind
And for a while I would
Appreciate her little schemes
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Author:
Neville (
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Sweet memories run through these few lines giving a most appealing read. I can relate to the stealing of minds with short-lasting dreams my friend............................ Fay
thanking you dear Fay..... have a super Sunday my friend
A lovely write, Neville.
thank you my friend..
xxx
Should I meet her?! lol.
Nah........ N
Aww, I was looking forward to meeting her. Now she's dashed off! lol.
Neville,
“Childish Smiles”
Endearing...
to say the least!
A wonderful write!
~Laura~
thank you Laura....
It's a kinda magic
Well captured Neville
thank you sir....
Good write but do I detect further machinations to come.
there always are.... cheers GF60.....
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