Mottakeenur Rehman


Eventhough either the Hanging Gardens of Babylon or the Black Hole of the outer space

I am not the perfect types of that stragging things which levitate on the void,

I like the experiment of emptiness heart and soul

In the definition of emptiness too stays hidden-

The mental affliction of worldly happiness or 

The conclusion of earthly delightedness.


  • Michael Edwards

    I find this really appealing - and intrigueing.

    • Mottakeenur Rehman

      Sir Thanks a Lot! Sir please check my another poem "Topsyturvy Shunt".......Happy Translation Day!!

    • Neville

      certainly a very interesting statement...

    • orchidee

      A good write, yet I feel open and vulnerable leaving things, especially my mind, empty.

    • FineB

      Hi Mottakeenur,

      We are sad self obsessed and selfish world only interested in putting our faith in empty meaningless sources.

      A great write.

      Keeo writing FineB

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