a taste to forget

dusk arising

 

now everything
tastes of drugs
and i am tainted
polluted by saviour
as cheemo rules
my body and brain
befuddled with no memory
overbalancing, vomiting
stumbling, staring, sleeping
ah yes sleep takes my days
onto strange beds
in clinical wards
a land of anyone else
but mine
where is mine
where is my mind
where is my life and hope
and all i want is to goto work
where i do good
people like me
and i'm not a burden
on this sickbed of sorrows
like a total waste of space

  • Author: dusk arising (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 30th, 2019 13:56
  • Comment from author about the poem: maybe an insight of chemotherapy side effects for somebody, mind lost, these bits i am conscious of though
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Neville

    what an incredibly powerful and emotive post today..... and one I think I can relate to......truly..

    • dusk arising

      This hopefully is my final weeks treatment of this first phase and i will be so glad when its over... just spent 4/5 days in hospital drugged mindless.... oh for a rest and getting back to me again. Thanks as ever Neville.

      • Neville

        Keeping my fingers crossed my friend and shall be thinking about you, no bull....... Neville

      • Bragee

        very emotional piece that many ppl can relate to.
        maybe we have it all wrong. Misery does not just love company but rather needs company

        • dusk arising

          Usually i'm upbeat and positive but see no negatives in displaying a part of me in a place i didnt want to be but had to endure..... still a part of me lost in cheemo drugs but i'll be back (hasta la vista baby - schwartzenegger)

        • Poetic Dan

          Wow... I can't begin to know what the right thing is but what an ending. That burden to be a burden, thank you for sharing!

          Much peace and respect

          • dusk arising

            Not like me is it Dan but we're all human and this is a reveal of how i felt on the drugs downer in chemotherapy. Still ongoing but there'll be an end to it. Keep looking at tomorrow Dan, the sun rises for you and all every beautiful day.

            • Poetic Dan

              And to you my friend I've seen two clients go through it and then go back to long walks with the dogs!
              Your spirit won't let you stop!

            • ANGELA & BRIAN

              Thanks for sharing DA a very emotive piece about the SIDE EFFECTS of Chemo. I (BRIAN) am a Biochemist so I can understand the effects of Drugs on Human Physiology to combat C*N*E* And some of Angelas Clients are on Chemo - so to a degree we can emphasise without the experience - OK

              Every Blessing - Thinkng & Praying for YOU
              Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💙🧡💙🧡💙

              • dusk arising

                Thank you for your support in this. I felt i wanted to show the edge of despair in me as i lost control of my senses thru these drugs.

              • Goldfinch60

                Very powerful emotive write d a, I do hope that soon you will feel better.

                https://youtu.be/WRuY3_4BxhE

                • dusk arising

                  Thanks Goldfinch, just me on a drug enduced downer. Interesting to re-read my expression a day later as the haze lifts off me. Glad i published it last nite tho. Hoping to have a rest after this week when they let the good work 'rest' for a few weeks before they re-assess.
                  I'm fighting the good fight and still as positive as ever. Say hello to the river for me please friend.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    Will do d a, will do.

                  • Thoughts In Time

                    All shall be well..remember the power within...you’ve got this and I believe you are capable of overcoming all..intense write..don’t give up the fight 🌹

                    • dusk arising

                      I'm a very positive person and giving everything i can to defeat a cancer mentally, physically and spiritually. But there is chemotherapy which completely nauseates and upsets nearly every physical faculty turning one into a frail waste of space. Yes sometimes it's necessary to vent out the negative and that was the purpose of this piece. I was exploring myself here.

                      • Thoughts In Time

                        Not easy but keep keeping on and you shall overcome..best to get it out than keep it in...I pray medical CBD gets made legal ASAP🌹



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