Christina8

Crying Earth

Rainy days, they are the worst

Gloomy skies, disheartened sighs

I know the trees, they have a thirst

And to summers end, we'll say goodbye

 

Thunder in a lightning storm

There are no birds' melodies today

Outside it is too damn warm

A sign of our societies decay

Comments9

  • Neville

    the title drew me in and hooked me and once hooked, I was held fat till the very end.....

    Although not a lengthy poem, these words hit home and have a hell of an impact..... well written Christina...

    • Christina8

      Thank you so very much Neville....I really appreciate your kind words and compliments!

      • Neville

        you are most welcome.. hope you can pen a lot more...

      • Bragee

        well written piece of art.
        Enjoyed every line .

        • Christina8

          Thank you so much Bragee!! I really appreciate it!!

        • ANGELA & BRIAN

          HOLA CHRISTINA ~ BRIAN aqui - como estes ahora ? Love Poems about NATURE its Autumn in Essex (Fall colours more beautiful each day !) Its SPRING in NZ so I will go back TWO SEASONS in two weeks time ! Some Northern US States have already has S*O* ! So be happy your still warm & wet ! Climate Change s playing havock wirh Agriculture and our Grapes & Wines are competing with Spain -Italy - France ! Some Farmers are experimenting with CITRUS !
          Sorry the Cardinals aren*t singing ~ maybe tomorrow !

          Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
          Abrazos y Besos por TODOS
          Amor en El Spirito BRIAN y ANGELA
          ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก ๐Ÿ’™ ๐Ÿงก

          • Christina8

            Thank you so much for your beautiful reply! Yes, maybe tomorrow the cardinals will sing!! (Or knock on my window lol) Blessings to you and yours!! Christina

          • Clara

            This is such a great little poem!

            • Christina8

              Thank you so much Clara! Greatly appreciated!!

            • Fay Slimm.

              Such a good rhyme in these few lines with an important message - - a well worded read and thank you Christina

              • Christina8

                Thank you so much Fay, I so appreciate your input as always, thank you for your visit!!

              • dusk arising

                I hope i'm reading this correctly as a metaphor for green issues.
                Yep our very own society is in decay but there are societies kept completely ignorant of these issues.

                Oh for the ideal world where we are all truly the society of humanity and all we walk among.

                • Christina8

                  Yes it's for green issues....I so appreciate your feedback and your wonderful comments. Thanks DA!!

                • Goldfinch60

                  Powerful words Christina.

                  • Christina8

                    Thank you so much Andy, I appreciate the kind feedback!

                  • Suresh

                    Along with the Earth, so am I.

                    Thou poetic, your message is strongly felt

                    • Christina8

                      Thank you suresh for your strongly felt reply! It was very much appreciated!

                    • Maxine Smith

                      So gripping and powerful Christina.
                      Great read hun.

                      • Christina8

                        Thanks so much Maxine!

                        • Maxine Smith

                          Your welcome hun.



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