Who is She?

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  Neville October 2nd, 2019 04:36

  I once knew a girl who fitted these words perfectly... a lovely little poem ma'am if you dont mind me just sayin.... N..

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    ClaraOctober 2nd, 2019 08:06

    Thank YOU Neville. Shame people like the above are more common than we think.

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  Fay Slimm. October 2nd, 2019 04:47

  I love the form and style of this denunciation of two-facedness Clara - - that girl certainly does need to change and oust those "demons within" - a good read my friend.

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    ClaraOctober 2nd, 2019 08:08

    Hi Fay, thank you so much. I appreciate your comments and take on my poems.

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  dusk arising October 2nd, 2019 10:03

  Life brings all sorts to our door including demons and disasters, which shape us into what we are.
  
  Great poem displaying the dilemma of what we could be, should be, maybe and more.

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    ClaraOctober 2nd, 2019 10:57

    Indeed it does and what a journey it is. Thank you for your time as always Dusk Arising.

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  Goldfinch60 October 3rd, 2019 01:24

  There are some like this this that we meet in our lives, both women and men. Ignore them and move on, the good people are always out there.
  Super poem Clara.

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    ClaraOctober 3rd, 2019 08:42

    Thank you GF. I'm beginning to think there's more of those people out there. But the good ones are there somewhere. Thanks for reading. Always appreciate your time.

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  Poetic Dan October 8th, 2019 07:24

  Omg that was amazing... So raw and real any gender can know of the shadow of one's own soul, for I once walked the walked you write of.
  
  Thank you for another reflection 😉

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    ClaraOctober 8th, 2019 14:40

    Thank you Dan! Yes, I have became very familiar with the shadow of mine recent years but I am finding my way. Appreciate your time as always.