Waves crashing

Alta H Mabin

The beats of my heart... still
lovingly embracing
the night sky
ember ebbs to forever

I witness the stars
as they greet
where souls meet
under a galaxy of

loving dreams
of forever

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Neville October 2nd, 2019 14:09
a delightful cluster of words......
- Alta H MabinOctober 2nd, 2019 14:15
  Thank you, Neville. So appreciate you my lovely friend.xxxx
orchidee October 3rd, 2019 01:12
A fine write Alta. OK I won't go, if this is the theme of the poem? I'll stay. I never realised it would so dramatic if I left ya. lol.
- Alta H MabinOctober 3rd, 2019 01:45
  Yes, don't leave, ever. xxxx
Goldfinch60 October 3rd, 2019 01:34
Those stars are holes in heavens floor where we will all be one day. Not too soon though.
Wonderful words Alta.
- Alta H MabinOctober 3rd, 2019 01:46
  Yes, hopefully not too soon. Thanks so much, Goldfinch.
Fay Slimm. October 3rd, 2019 02:11
Soul mates are ever connected and as your verse points to the stars as the place of your loving dreams the words resurrect the same feelings for this poet too Alta. - a lovely read.
- Alta H MabinOctober 3rd, 2019 10:57
  Thank you for your beautiful comment, Fay. So appreciate your words. xx

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