I see you through
a reflection I only wish
you could enjoy, raw and beautiful
but this is my view, for now
At first glance, I dare not ask to dance!
Intimidating...
Breaking down your high walls
has been a task, a frustrating challenge
You speak few words,
your time
I have to demand
but demand, I will
For the man I see, the gentleman in you,
is worth my effort
surely one day, for you to demand
... more time with me
- Author: Alta H Mabin (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: October 8th, 2019 14:13
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 36
Comments3
A gentleman will never demand, he awaits your pleasure.
Oh, so gracefully. Thanks lovely, Dusk.
I agree with gentleman above, we wait in ocean of a woman's love!
Great work
Thanks so much, Poetic Dan. Appreciate your thoughts.
Good one Alta and what dusk arising said is so true.
Thanks for your feedback Goldfinch, appreciate it.
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