Alta H Mabin

The perfect gentleman

I see you through

a reflection I only wish

you could enjoy, raw and beautiful

but this is my view, for now


At first glance, I dare not ask to dance!


Breaking down your high walls

has been a task, a frustrating challenge


You speak few words,

your time

I have to demand

but demand,  I will


For the man I see, the gentleman in you,

is worth my effort

surely one day, for you to demand

... more time with me


  • dusk arising

    A gentleman will never demand, he awaits your pleasure.

    • Alta H Mabin

      Oh, so gracefully. Thanks lovely, Dusk.

    • Poetic Dan

      I agree with gentleman above, we wait in ocean of a woman's love!

      Great work

      • Alta H Mabin

        Thanks so much, Poetic Dan. Appreciate your thoughts.

      • Goldfinch60

        Good one Alta and what dusk arising said is so true.

        • Alta H Mabin

          Thanks for your feedback Goldfinch, appreciate it.

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