CHOICES VERSE VOICES:
Choices
Are not
The
Voices
In your
Head
It’s the
Brain
Trying to
Outwit
The game
That tends
To send
One
Insane
It’s the
Hollow
Presence
Reminding
You
To remain
Present
In this moment
In time
For this is
All we have
To hold fast
To
And not loose
Your cost
To-
You may have
Been
Through and
Through
But it’s all
Bringing you
Back
To the true
You
It might
Not all be such
A pretty view
But it’s all
Up to you
Will you get through
Or will you lose
The true you
To the lost
And lonely
View of
What you call
You
You are not
Those voices
Causing
Dilemmas
Incorrect choices
Those are
Lying voices
Interfering
With correct
Honest
Choices
That once
Lost
Will cost you
To see
That the true
You..me..
Never wanted to make
Those choices
It was confusion
Within those
Voices
When time is done
And the race is won
You don’t want
To be the
One
Lost
Forlorn
Regretting
What the choices
Of the voices
Has done
Don’t be
That
Disappointed
One .
27/09/2019
Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
- Author: Thoughts In Time (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: October 10th, 2019 00:32
- Comment from author about the poem: Choices take us to where we land up in time..yours or mine..just a matter of time🌹
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 31
Comments7
Those choices are always there and I like to think that the choices that I have made in my long life have brought me to this place of peacefulness that I now enjoy.
We live we learn we fall we burn but then we rise again...🌹
This is a rather impressive poem. Well expressed and a wonderful rhyming structure. Much enjoyed.
Thankyou for your kind words and stopping by to read ...🌹
You said it well Kelly! Love the minimalist lines. Sometimes one word says as much as a whole bunch of them.
Thankyou I appreciate your time..🌹
All my poems are about me myself and I and reflecting on life now and past and reflecting on why we -I and u-do the things we do???might just never find that answer...Thankyou for stopping by🌹
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