Alta H Mabin

My love for you will never die

You will always be

my one true hero, my love

... you love her instead

Comments4

  • orchidee

    Ooohh, it'll all be OK. I'll stay with ya! Ya knew I would! lol.

    • Alta H Mabin

      Oh, I know you will...xxx

    • Jamie

      That’s a powerful emotional drop!

      • Alta H Mabin

        Thanks so much, Jamie.

      • dusk arising

        Firstly, an excuse, you'll never find me a fan of mixed arithmetic and poetry (haiku etc)..

        This reminds me of how i used to feel towards a certain lost lover (or two). Then somehow i learned to love myself. Everything changed! Love itself changed, was enhanced by a new awareness. Now i love that the 'heroine' was able to move on into a more hopefully suitable situation.

        • Alta H Mabin

          I love that. Thank you!x

        • Goldfinch60

          Powerful Senryu Alta.

          • Alta H Mabin

            Thanks so much, Goldfinch60. So appreciate this.



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