My love for you will never die

Alta H Haffner

You will always be

my one true hero, my love

... you love her instead

  • Author: Alta H Mabin (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 13th, 2019 12:32
  • Category: Haiku
  • Views: 29
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  • orchidee

    Ooohh, it'll all be OK. I'll stay with ya! Ya knew I would! lol.

  • Jamie

    That’s a powerful emotional drop!

  • dusk arising

    Firstly, an excuse, you'll never find me a fan of mixed arithmetic and poetry (haiku etc)..

    This reminds me of how i used to feel towards a certain lost lover (or two). Then somehow i learned to love myself. Everything changed! Love itself changed, was enhanced by a new awareness. Now i love that the 'heroine' was able to move on into a more hopefully suitable situation.

  • Goldfinch60

    Powerful Senryu Alta.

    • Alta H Haffner

      Thanks so much, Goldfinch60. So appreciate this.



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