Stillness

Thoughts In Time

'Stillness'

 

The stillness

All around,

So empty and

Without sound-

It suffocates-

It creeps

Around,

And wants

To pull

You down-

Death

Shows its

Head-

But its

All a 

Test-

Just believe

And you

Will receive-

All that

You thought

Was out

Of 

Reach..

 

Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe 

2017 

  • Author: Thoughts In Time (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 17th, 2019 00:01
  • Comment from author about the poem: Be still and know..all shall be well..
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments6

  • Goldfinch60

    That stillness within yourself can be the making of us all as we can see the wonder of our world.

    Andy

  • Thoughts In Time

    So very true...stillness teaches us to accept ourselves and others and what true love is..itโ€™s necessary I think to make you see things how they are for if we rely on others weโ€™ll never be happy and when we compete and always want to prove a point...we are lost..the key is just to be..Thankyou ..wishing you a wonderful day ๐ŸŒน

  • orchidee

    A fine write T.

  • Neville

    you have almost convinced me that all things are possible... a delightful poem my friend...

    • Thoughts In Time

      You know all is possible when u believe...

    • ANGELA & BRIAN

      SPEAK LORD in the STILLNESS
      While we wait on THEE
      Hushed our HEARTS to listen
      In expectancy ~ AMEN

      Good Evening Kelly ~ Stillness is very important
      If we are to hear the VOICE of GOD ! We live in a
      very noisy WORLD too many decibels !can we eve
      If we cannot even hear each other speak ~ how
      can we ever expect us to hear the VOICE of GOD ?

      Love & Peace & Joy
      ANGELA & BRIAN
      ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

    • Thoughts In Time

      So very true and yes we need to be still...many thanks for the visit ๐ŸŒน



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