‘Impatience’
Impatience
Is not
A virtue
It only hurts you
It’s puts you
Off course
You puff and
Shout
Letting out all
That’s built up
And full of
Doubt
Calm yourself
What’s the need
To rush about
Not caring
Not sharing
Not bearing
In mind
The affects
You’ll have on
Mankind
What can’t wait
Sets your heartbeat
At such a pace
Forgetting grace
Everything becomes
A race
To accumulate time
Into condensed space
Misplaced actions
Cause reactions
Into a maze
Uncontrolled haze
In the here and now
Is where patience
Is found
Set your feet
Upon the ground
Feel and see
That this is all
That’s meant
For you and me
Focus on a tree
What do you see
Grounded
Rooted
Swaying in time
To the earths music
Not controlled by
The state of a distressed
Mind
Complete in balance
Bouncing around
Like on a trampoline
Waiting on that’s
Not seen
Where we dream
And all is redeemed
What was achieved
On not waiting on
What’s meant to be
Can you now see
That impatience
Does not bring clarity
But the charity
Of learning
Self control.
Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
17/10/2019
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In all my life I have been patient and everything that I needed seems to have come my way. Impatience is just not the way to achieve anything in life.
Great true write Kelly.
You absolutely radiate it my friend!
I’m glad you have the testimony to prove it and you are right if you wait upon what’s meant to be and believe all shall come your what..what’s meant to be won’t ever pass you by..Thankyou for stopping by🌹
"I want patience, and I want it now!" Oohh, heehee. Good write T.
Lol...I want it all and you know what I want doesn’t get..lol..have a wonderful day 🌹
Fantastic morning read! Thank you!
So glad you enjoyed it ...blessings for you and yours today 🌹
GOOD MORNING KELLY - A real wake up call ! Love the visual and the admonition in an elegant ODE ! PATIENCE is a FRUIT OF the HOLY SPIRIT and Brian & I need it in every day JOBS because we work with PEOPLE not THINGS ! Thanks for sharing ! Please check *BLUE HAWAII*
Love PEACE & JOY
ANGELA & BRIAN
Many thanks and yes I will-have a wonderful day 🌹
this is a me now generation
True that is want everything in a silver platter🌹
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