Flower petals dance
Brightest colorful greetings
a storm full of dust...
- Author: Alta H Mabin (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: October 19th, 2019 09:20
- Category: Haiku
- Views: 22
Flower petals dance
Brightest colorful greetings
a storm full of dust...
Comments4
A fine write Alta. It made a storm, and a big mess anyway, when I was about to empty me hole-punch, and the bottom of it fell off when I picked it up! Always tricky if a bottom falls off. lol.
Brevity at its finest..
Good haiku Alta.
Superb haiku captures nature vividly and with muse comparison. Kudos.
Pls pleez do comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem too.
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