Neville

When I Find You

When I Find You

 

When I eventually find you

You will surely be

My final indiscretion

 

And

 

When I inevitably do

I shall take you every way

You ever wanted and wherever too

Comments6

  • kevin browne

    Is this an innuendo or are you just flirting with your pen...???

    • Neville

      I was seduced by a pen at a very young and impressionable age.... indelibly so.... Thanks my friend and true...

    • Goldfinch60

      I can see so many meanings in this write Neville - clever write.

      • Neville

        Many golden thank you's my most finely feathered friend... N

      • orchidee

        Coooee, look no futher. I'm here! Then again, I always am here - like a bad......smell, no, bad penny! lol.

        • Neville

          Thanks for putting your two scents in Orchidee....

        • Suresh

          No matter how I say it, there's no way to avoid eroticism - AAAHHHH!!!
          what a wetdream, sorry, I meant daydream.

          • Neville

            better than a pipe dream.....any day o the week.... thanks Suresh.. N

          • FineB

            Wow Neville,

            That is a good write.

            Very passionate.

            Keep writing FineB

            • Neville

              thanking you kindly .... Neville

            • Fay Slimm.

              Love making with someone not even met is so specially tied in with inevitability in this intriguing and previously unread oldie mon ami - - glad to have caught the gentle erotica in that second stanza which warmed all my cockles.......................... x

              • Neville



                Bless you dear Fay .. x



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