'I Walked A While'
I walked a
While
On the seaside
With you-
The sea so
Blue-
With love
So true-
I watched
The waves
And how the
Birds flew-
And there
I fell in love
With you-
We walked and
Talked and
Forgot what
We knew-
I walked a while
On the seaside
With you-
We felt the
Seasand
Between our
Toes-
The cold air
Blowing
Against our
Nose-
The sand
So wet-
The water so
Cold-
And each thinking
Thoughts that
Remain untold-
I walked a while
On the seaside
With you-
And all the
Time
You knew
And
I did too.
24/04/2017
Kelly Fagelund-Gjersoe
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Author:
Thoughts In Time (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Special moments in time becoming special memories.
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A fine write Kelly. Ahh, I remember that walk well - the two of us! heehee.
Lol glad your memory is good...🌹
A piece capturing the romance of time spent with a loved one - a delightful read Kelly and thank you for sharing it.
Thankyou for stopping by glad you enjoyed it 🌹
Very romantic poem.
Thankyou ...special memories🌹
what a smashing little wandering ... I just got back from the beach too....
Thankyou...memories on Blouberg Strand 🌹
BRIAN HERE ~ Thanks KELLY for sharing a Romantic Walk on the Beach @ BLOUBERGSTRAND ~ Cape Town ~ South Africa with the romantic view of Table Mountain just across the Bay ! Who wouldnt fall in Love. I fell in Love with Cape Town ~ when I visited with Friends ten years ago ! From the Friendly City along the Karroos ~ five days in Cape Town and back to Port Elizabeth via the Garden Route ! We to loved walking along the tideline @ Bloubergstrand ! Ive promised to take ANGELA one day it is MAGICAL ! Please check our Poem today ~ it is on a similar theme ! A *Love Walk* through the Woods ~ guided by a Snow White Dove ~ and then finding our River of Love ! MPS needs a little ROMANCE !
Peace & Joy & Love
BRIAN & ANGELA
💙🧡💙🧡💙
Thankyou for the wonderful words ..yes it’s a beautiful place but don’t take her now while it’s not safe wait a bit to see what happens..I will visit your poem...Table Mountain is a sight for sore eyes..🌹
In these, so poetic words, my imagination believes the YOU here to be the wet sand, the waves, the setting sun and the amber sky.
Thank you
Glad you enjoyed the walk 🌹
Beautiful loving write, those moments are so very special and must be treasured.
Yes so true..life is short🌹
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