Soul-Beauty.
Find the place where two seas meet,
stand on the edge of seen and unseen
and listen to Heaven speaking.
Love is too vast to describe in words,
look into the mirror's human universe
and discover new depths of person.
Unclad soul-beauty is empty of Self
when clothed with wonder's ecstasy
and enriched by reality's wealth.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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Where did you get that X-ray picture of my 2nd left top molar?
I read those two seas as the real inner you and the perceived outer you. When they meet you have 'oneness'...
Oneness is teaching me all about beauty and how wide a subject love is.
Great use of metaphor. Compact and punchy piece for this vast spiritual subject.
Am humbled that my poetic efforts affect you dear friend. Oneness with all is, I believe, that which allows the authentic to enter our perceived persona and with its alchemy change us to see the reality of who we truly are - beautiful and powerful beings and made of the same stuff as stars...............Ha - now you have me on my favourite soap-box - - but thank you most kindly for your visit and comment .
It's been a long time coming but i feel i'm now there with 'oneness'. It feels like being the real thing i was meant to be.... or maybe, fully matured like a good cheese perhaps. I know that being a poet on mps has certainly shown me a path which led me to me.
Would love to read more from you on this subject.
Well, see ya when I get back. I'm gonna get me boat out and find a place where two seas meet. lol.
Oooh - dont be long away dear Orchi - that meeting of seas can be dangerous and we would miss you if you stayed.
This is a soul searching poem Fay and so meaningful in my new found life.
Am thrilled that you found something of value in the piece dear Andy - - your comment is truly appreciated and thank you.
Wow....
what an amazing image you have used here to accompany a truly beautiful little poetic gem... No B...
Heartfelt thanks Nev. both for your taking time to drop in and read Soul-Beauty and for the generous review you give. Gratefully received I might say too and waving with a huge thank you.
Wonderful Poem.
Am delighted that you thought the read wonderful dear Lamar and thank you indeed for your dropping in for a read.
This masterpiece simply describes where I've been within myself. If I could describe no-thing it would simply be void of thought/things.. In fact I couldn't describe it at all.. It's great to get back to the middle and be impartial which I understand myself to being part of it all.. Now i'm going into my own tangent..
Thank you Fay x
My thanks Alita for your visit and comment on Soul-Beauty - am so pleased that you found in it something to which you could relate............... my gratitude for dropping by.
Excellent writing! It's very thought provoking
touching write fay,mystical and great imagery
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