supremesolitude

Heart 💔 Break

Heartbreak

 

I thought you was the one from the

start

We got closer and closer till we drifted apart

you cross my mind morning and night you was the light to my

dark

I feel useless without you I know this is the end but wish we could go back to the

Start

 

 

I caught the feelings you

threw

You was my bae and I was your

boo

I loved you more then I loved myself

The only thing I cherish is

you

 

The pain I feel I can’t

describe

It’s like you ripped my heart out and placed it in a vice

looked me in my eyes and squeezed it tight

told me everything will be

alright but you lied cause I’d rather die!

 

We all make mistakes so we all can relate

all I wanna do is see your

Face

Memories we can’t erase

Nor can I pick up these pieces

From this HEART BREAK.

 

S.S.

 

Comments5

  • Goldfinch60

    Very good emotive write, may those pieces of your heart soon come back together.
    Welcome to MPS.

  • ANGELA & BRIAN

    Good Morning *SS* Brian here ! Welcome to MPS and thanks for your First Poem. It is very well presented but alas with a sad SUBJECT ~ HEARTBREAK ! Im 36 and before I met ANGELA three years ago I had my share of the Ecstasy & Agony of Love ! As a Man (its harder for Ladies ?) my MANTRA has always been *Better to have loved & lost ~ than never to have loved at all !* I have learned someting from all my sometimes painful liaisons ! I trust things will work out better for you *LOVE* is a minefield !
    MPS works by reading and commenting on each others POEMS ~ OK. Please visit our site ~ Thanks. We have requested you to be our MPS Friend !

    Every Blessing for the FUTURE
    Yours BRIAN & ANGELA (UK)

  • shanice

    This is amazing!!

  • Tia Davis/テイア

    This is just amazing I loved it wonderful write.

  • Tia Davis/テイア

    This is just amazing I loved it wonderful write.



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