Truism
What we seem to have here
In abundance
Is much of the sameness
That eventually broke us.....
And
While the world is filled with
Such moreness
It would seem that these words
Are nowt but a work in progress
=
Truth
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Author:
Neville (
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Yes very true Neville, all the time we have that 'work in progress' we know we are alive and worth something.
Darn write sir.. and thank you for visiting and brightening today.... N
A fine write Neville.
That's fine then ... cheers Orchidee.. and have a good day...
Your pen Nev identifies results so well in these few lines with this telling account of the power Sameness can yield in a shaky relationship .
Tis a truism indeed and I thank thee for it and then some..... Ta muchly my lady .... N
like your words, life is WIP - very few reach absolute contentment, wouldn't that be blissful!
Not to steer away from your poem
thank you Suresh.. you are of course spot on... and yes, that would be something else.. cheers my friend..... Neville
wonderful, so relatable to mere instinctive scribblers like me my friend
................................... Too kind, as always, but am gonna thank ya BIG ..
... All Good Things & Seasons Best Brother ....
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