Truism

Neville

Truism

 

What we seem to have here

In abundance

 

Is much of the sameness

That eventually broke us.....

 

And

 

While the world is filled with

Such moreness

 

It would seem that these words

Are nowt but a work in progress

 

=

 

Truth

 

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 19th, 2019 01:43
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments5

  • Goldfinch60

    Yes very true Neville, all the time we have that 'work in progress' we know we are alive and worth something.

    • Neville

      Darn write sir.. and thank you for visiting and brightening today.... N

    • orchidee

      A fine write Neville.

      • Neville

        That's fine then ... cheers Orchidee.. and have a good day...

      • Fay Slimm.

        Your pen Nev identifies results so well in these few lines with this telling account of the power Sameness can yield in a shaky relationship .

        • Neville

          Tis a truism indeed and I thank thee for it and then some..... Ta muchly my lady .... N

        • Suresh

          like your words, life is WIP - very few reach absolute contentment, wouldn't that be blissful!

          Not to steer away from your poem

          • Neville

            thank you Suresh.. you are of course spot on... and yes, that would be something else.. cheers my friend..... Neville

          • L. B. Mek

            wonderful, so relatable to mere instinctive scribblers like me my friend

            • Neville



              ................................... Too kind, as always, but am gonna thank ya BIG ..
              ... All Good Things & Seasons Best Brother ....



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