Jane Frye

Outback

You left without a goodbye,
leaving us all to speculate why.
I truely enjoyed your poetic side.
While you were here, it was a fun ride.
I'm hoping it's true,
that you left for something new.
But, if you were misjudged and misplaced,
and then completely erased;
I want you to know,
that I was a fan,
and affectionately thought of you as the word man.
Peace out.

 

 

 

Comments7

  • LAWLESS

    Thanks for writing this Jane. I am a fan of his too.

    • Jane Frye

      He is a unique, creative, and interesting man. Hope he knows that he is missed.

    • Goldfinch60

      Good write about a wonderful person, we will miss him.

      • Jane Frye

        I'm still holding on to hope. Hoping he will return.

      • orchidee

        Some things he said went over my head - me, a simple soul - not THAT simple! lol. He had his own style.

        • Jane Frye

          Sometimes I had to ask him for clarification too. Not because he was being unclear, but because my thoughts were going in a different direction.

        • Laura

          Jane,

          Perhaps he was ‘misjudged’ and/or ‘misplaced’...
          but he will never be ‘completely erased’!
          Like a Phoenix, he will rise once again from its ashes!

          ~Laura~

          • Jane Frye

            Thank you, Laura. That would have been a better ending to the poem. I like that it's positive and graceful.

            • Laura

              Jane,

              Your ending is perfectly fine. All I meant to say is that he will do his utmost to be back and he will succeed!

              Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem!

              ~Laura~

            • tepo

              The word man
              Perfect

            • Unsub

              Jane,

              great poem. He will be sorely missed with his insightful comments & OUTlook on life.

              Thankfully he hasn't had his day yet; you can kick a man when he's down but he is a defiant bugger.

              Unsub.

              • Jane Frye

                I think so too, Unsub.

              • Jane Frye



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