Jane Frye

Outback

You left without a goodbye,
leaving us all to speculate why.
I truely enjoyed your poetic side.
While you were here, it was a fun ride.
I'm hoping it's true,
that you left for something new.
But, if you were misjudged and misplaced,
and then completely erased;
I want you to know,
that I was a fan,
and affectionately thought of you as the word man.
Peace out.

 

 

 

Comments5

  • Goldfinch60

    Good write about a wonderful person, we will miss him.

    • Jane Frye

      I'm still holding on to hope. Hoping he will return.

    • orchidee

      Some things he said went over my head - me, a simple soul - not THAT simple! lol. He had his own style.

      • Jane Frye

        Sometimes I had to ask him for clarification too. Not because he was being unclear, but because my thoughts were going in a different direction.

      • Laura

        Jane,

        Perhaps he was ‘misjudged’ and/or ‘misplaced’...
        but he will never be ‘completely erased’!
        Like a Phoenix, he will rise once again from its ashes!

        ~Laura~

        • Jane Frye

          Thank you, Laura. That would have been a better ending to the poem. I like that it's positive and graceful.

          • Laura

            Jane,

            Your ending is perfectly fine. All I meant to say is that he will do his utmost to be back and he will succeed!

            Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem!

            ~Laura~

          • Unsub

            Jane,

            great poem. He will be sorely missed with his insightful comments & OUTlook on life.

            Thankfully he hasn't had his day yet; you can kick a man when he's down but he is a defiant bugger.

            Unsub.

            • Jane Frye

              I think so too, Unsub.

            • Jane Frye



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