You left without a goodbye,
leaving us all to speculate why.
I truely enjoyed your poetic side.
While you were here, it was a fun ride.
I'm hoping it's true,
that you left for something new.
But, if you were misjudged and misplaced,
and then completely erased;
I want you to know,
that I was a fan,
and affectionately thought of you as the word man.
Peace out.
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Author:
Jane Frye (
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Comments4
Good write about a wonderful person, we will miss him.
I'm still holding on to hope. Hoping he will return.
Some things he said went over my head - me, a simple soul - not THAT simple! lol. He had his own style.
Sometimes I had to ask him for clarification too. Not because he was being unclear, but because my thoughts were going in a different direction.
Jane,
Perhaps he was ‘misjudged’ and/or ‘misplaced’...
but he will never be ‘completely erased’!
Like a Phoenix, he will rise once again from its ashes!
~Laura~
Thank you, Laura. That would have been a better ending to the poem. I like that it's positive and graceful.
Jane,
Your ending is perfectly fine. All I meant to say is that he will do his utmost to be back and he will succeed!
Thank you for sharing your wonderful poem!
~Laura~
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