Patiently Impatient


Communicate with me,

All I ever requested,

If there’s an issue you see,

Speak up and let’s rest it.


A lot of the time,

I’m left none the wiser.

I think everything’s fine,

Yet somethings left to decipher.


It’s the silence speaking volumes,

The snapping and the stressing.

Creating an atmospheric commune.

I’m growing weary I must confess.


I hope you open up,

Before these doors close for good.

Patiently, I await the moment.

But there are times, I’m not sure I should?

  • Author: G (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 23rd, 2019 12:33
  • Comment from author about the poem: Trying to figure someone out
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 39


  • FredPeyer

    Communication is the key, but sometimes we need to listen to the silence, because there are answers in silence too. Very well written G84!

    • G84

      I agree Fred! Silence can be deafening at times, just another write airing a frustration 🙂

      Thank you for your comment

    • Goldfinch60

      Very good write G84, understanding all about each other is the key to any full relationship.

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