Poetic Dan

Penny for your thoughts

You hear that beautiful sound of the rain coming down

 

Natures way of washing everything found, quickly filling & overflowing anything

 

Even more so the tins, with only a few penny's in

 

To live is to hold on against the tide, I love the wet & cold weather helping bodys hold tight

 

To forget my thoughts but never my fear weatherd friends, imagine if we all just dropped a few more in

 

 

Comments4

  • FredPeyer

    PD, where do you come up with these ideas? I love this poem.

    • Poetic Dan

      Gladly I only spent a short time of my youth on the street so that feeling will never be forgot! Plus being in the south of UK by the coast you see so many, sadly you will still get the mix of the ones just being rebellious and the broken souls that could not see anything else.
      (think I'll put that in my notes now)

      Thanks for your time my friend, always appreciated!

    • yellowrose

      I love this too . You have a good way with your words

      • Poetic Dan

        Thank you for your kind words, it like marmite, you love it or hate it!

        Always appreciated

      • Goldfinch60

        Wonderful write, I too give what I can Dan.

        • Poetic Dan

          I would expect nothing less good sir!

        • sarahlynne

          Homelessness has become so prevalent in today’s world...I really think you brought the plight of homeless alive.

          • Poetic Dan

            Sadly it is and I could of gone a different direction as yesterday I saw a lady with a suitcase on the street, it is a mental health condition of why we do this to ourselves.

            Thanks for your time, always appreciated



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