Throughout my life there have been hills,
Each one climbed,
Some easily,
Others harder,
Until I came to the one,
The one that could not be climbed.
I looked at it,
I worried,
I decided to dig,
To dig through the hill,
Make a tunnel beneath.
It was hard,
So hard I nearly gave up,
But came that day,
That day when I dug through.
I was so tired
But so relieved.
As I now look back,
Look back at the tunnel,
I am now free,
Free to move on,
To move on with freedom,
Into my new found life.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Those on here who know me know that the mountain was dealing with my wife's dementia she is now in care in a very safe and wonderful place and my life has returned to me being me.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments5
A thoughtful write Gold.
Thanks Orchi.
The tunnel . Yes , we have to find a way through somehow . A good piece of writing
Thank you yellowrose, yes there is always a way.
Thanks for sharing UNCLE ANDY ~ Loved the metaphor ! Reminded me of the CHOURUS !
Got any rivers you think are uncrossable
Got any Mountaines you cant tunnel through
God specialises in things thought impossible
We all have Mountains iin our Lives but ~ so far ~ Angela & I have found that by dilligence and Prayer most problems can be eased or even solved. You have been a great example to us in your relationship with your Lovely Wife JOYCE. Friends of ours have shared the initial Pain when one in a Marriage has to leave the Family Home and go into care. You have shared a similar situation with us. Because you are happy that JOYCE is in Loving hands ~ and you are able to visit her regularly ~ your memories are intact & precious and you are FREE to start a NEW phase of your life ~ knowing that you have always done your very best for JOYCE in every circumstance ! You & Joyce are on our Prayer list every day ~ it is a pleasure to know you and we pray ~ that both your futures will be blest ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOUR Lovely JOYCE
Love in the Spirit ANGELA & BRIAN 🧡💙🧡💙🧡
A hard tunnel to dig my friend - - so pleased you got through - - - keep going forward in your new life....
Thank you Fay, yes I intend to move forward in happiness.
It's been an absolute life changing experience sharing our lives through theses word my friend and this truly lives upto your name, pure gold my friend.
Thank you for just be authentically you and me you both now relax and let life just flow one step at a time, you deserve it!
Much peace and respect
Thank you so very much for your kind words Dan, they are very much appreciated.
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