A distance of a thousand miles
Seems eternities apart
Yet no pain of distance greater
Than distance of the heart.
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Author:
benevolentbluebabe (
Offline) - Published: November 27th, 2019 15:15
- Category: Love
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Comments4
ANGELA HERE ~ GOOD EVENING FRIEND ~ Welcome to MPS and thanks for your FIRST POEM. A perfect LOVE SONG ! Brian is my Fiance and we know the pain of Physical Distance because until recently I was in New Zealand on work experience and BRIAN was in the UK near London (11,500 MILES) Your poem speaks of TWO HEARTS out of sync and that pain really is greater than physical separation. Brian & I have both experienced that in previous relationships. When two hearts beat as ONE - we can bear the pain of Physical Separation ~ OK
Thanks for your poem ~ more please
MPS works by reading & commenting on each others POEMS ~ OK.
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
pain,not far to travel i guess,but still hurts
So very true, good write.
Welcome to MPS.
Short and true, well written!
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