Why do you do it? Poem, by Aa Harvey, at My poetic side

Why do you do it?

I want you, to make me happy.

I want something that guarantees happiness.

I want you, to help me escape,

From this thing called life, I have begun to hate.

I wish to raise up, to a higher plain.

I want to build a barrier, between the heart and the pain.

I want to be relaxed, when I talk to her.

I want to sound cool and not cheesy when I flirt.

I want us to all, to have one thing in common.

They’ve all done it before and I want to be like them.

I want to feel, what my idols felt.

I want to become someone else.

kevin browne November 30th, 2019 16:07
Well, it looks as though you are becoming someone else. Your poetry proves that within it's self impression of you crying your heart out, but still to persist for a better life. That's a magical and positive to beleive in. Keep your finger dipped in the river of positivity and it will take you anywhere you like and more importantly be you..

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