A chill in the breeze (Haiku Tanka)

Alta H Mabin

The morning rainfall
drizzled petals pink and white
the chill in the breeze
morning coffee, woken soul
tiny birds sing a new morn'

  • Author: Alta H Mabin (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 7th, 2019 05:32
  • Category: Haiku
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  • orchidee

    A fine write Alta.

    • Alta H Mabin

      Thank you, my lovely Orcidee. xxxxx

    • ANGELA & BRIAN

      Thnaks for sharing FRIEND ~ We are sure S Africa will be beautiful in Summer ! WE love tankas (57577) and see them as Mature Haiku ! You have chosen your WORDS carefully to produce a PERFECT TANKA ! Thanks for sharing & cheering a COLD & WET England !

      Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
      Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💚🧡💚🧡💚

      • Alta H Mabin

        Thank you so much, yes it is beautiful indeed, with a few days of summer rain.

      • Goldfinch60

        Good tanka, each new morning is wonderful.



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