My insecurities could eat me alive, on our first day we shared the same vibe
It's not easy knowing the problem is you, thinking there is nothing we can do
But within the silence, there is a hidden devotion
As long as neither party what's to harm the other
You can walk beside, yet not touch, as this sacred bond of trust knows only self love
Let a seed grow & space to move, nothing will reach if it's already confused.
The only option is to breath through the mind, letting no past create fear in your rhyme
Time is short, although the journey is long, so do what you can to say you followed no one.
Keep listing to their rhythm and you'll find your own. Thanks for helping me carry on writing no matter the tone
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Many reason I've written this but the last job I had threw me off! It's never easy to stand in front of a vibration that does not want you there, but if we listen carefully to the fear then we will find that there is always a connection. We just have to be willing to go the distance, I'm happy to say after 3 session she was happily walking around her garden with me. I am not in safe water as boundaries will always be tested but I'm a better version of me because nature helped shape it
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I'm sure you and the dogs have the good vibes between you both!
Not this one my friend! It could still turn at any moment but its what I get paid for!
Always appreciate the vist
in some people I've noticed a lot of emptyness, lonliness, suicidal, traumatised, scared an lost. This poem reveals the undercurrent flow of relentless and unwanted thoughts which since I've known of you have persisted to haunt you. However, I have met people with passion, love, desire, compassion, hope, determination, success, complimented, awarded and most importanly it's people like you who I've known normally end up winning the day with the power from within. Great acheivements on a scale which is difficult to reach. You have reached out within your poetry and to me that's just entirely beautiful..!!
I must say I read this last night & was lost for words. Tbc......
That long journey has led you into a new life of joy, yes there are still hard times but many are now dealt with and you are moving forward with experience and new found resilience - don't stop.
Andy
Yet that's all I want to do really, always appreciated my friend
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