He came through the gate
His throat was exposed
But his voice was steady
His demeaner composed
I stood there before him
Light in my hand
To show him the glory
That glory was his
He just needed to see
To find his new life
A life that would be
Full of bright light
The gate was now closed
His throat now covered
Into his future
He walked with such pride
The wolf was behind him
No need to now hide
Becoming the man
He should always have seen
His future secure
As it always had been
He came through the gate
His throat not exposed
His voice was so steady
His demeaner composed.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 12th, 2019 02:26
- Comment from author about the poem: I do hope you do not mind Unsub but after reading your wonderful poem 'Exposed' I felt I had to write something and these words came to me.
- Category: Reflection
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Comments3
A fine write Gold.
Thanks Orchi.
Thanks Gold, though I don't know what to say much, in response to this genre of poems. My standard phrases of 'good write' or 'fine write' usually.
Thnaks for sharing UNCLE ANDY ~ We are often influenced by the VIDEOS - VISUALS & POEMS of others on MPS. UNSUB*S postings are always inspiring & challenging. Love the BEAT in your video ~ We like that you cast your MUSIC NET into INFINITY ~ always very eclectic !
We love the morale in your POEM ! We can all be CHANGED ! We just have to venture *THROUGH THE GATE* ~ and *SEE THE LIGHT* ! The context has INFINITE conotations ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace to YOU and YOUR Lovely Joyce
LOVE ~ BRIAN & ANGELA ~ 💚🧡💚🧡💚🧡💚
Thank you A and B, what I didn't say was that the band is Unsubs, I was not going to mention it by he has on the comment below.
Andy
Powerful and inspired.
Thank you Jon, the inspiration came from Unsub's poem.
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