THIS POEM IS A PANTOUM OF ~ SEE AMID THE WINTER SNOW
SEE AMID THE WINTER SNOW
SEE The Lamb of God appears
BORN for US on Earth below
PROMISED from Eternal Years !
SEE the Lamb of God appears
LO within a Manger lies
PROMISED from Eternal Years
HE who created Earth & Skies !
LO within a Manger lies
HE who throned in Heaven sublime
HE who created Earth & Skies
WHO sat amid the SERAPHIM
HE who throned in Heaven sublime
THUS to come from Highest Bliss
WHO sat amid the SERAPHIM
DOWN to such a WORLD as this !
THUS to come from Highest Bliss
BORN for US on Earth below
DOWN to such a WORLD as this
SEE AMID THE WINTER SNOW !
Thanks for visiting ~ comments please ~ LOVE B & A 💚🧡💚
HAIL Thou ever Blessed Morn
SING through all JERUSALEM
HAIL Redemptions Happy Dawn
CHRIST IS BORN IN BETHLEHEM !
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Author:
ANGELA & BRIAN (Pseudonym) (
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Comments4
Great form - well constructed - bit early for you?
Thanks Uncle Mike ~ I like to take poems & hymns etc and turn them into PANTOUMS using repetition. It reqires abab or aabb ryming quatrains to allow it (so now you know !) It is EARLY for SNOW in Essex ~ generally late JAN or early FEB ~ if ever. Pleased you liked the presenttion ~ Someone like ANNIE LENNOX can breath new life into a Golden Oldie.
Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
Love Brian & Angela 💚🧡💚🧡💚
A fine write B&A. I've often wondered - would it be chance of snow in Israel in December? Seeing as we take that as the date of Christmas.
Thanks for your Q Uncle Steve ! people have queried that ! 25th December is His OFFI CIAL (not actual) Birthday fixed by a POPE in the 6th Century. In the UK its a bad time of the Year ~ Weatherwise ~ for Shopping & Travelling etc ~ I guess its warmer in Rome ! The date has spawed Carols like ~ In the Bleak mid-Winter etc ~ mainly written by Europeans ! The MAORI VERSION is *In the HOT mid-Summer* Angela really enjoyed her Cold C-PUD & Ice Cream on the Beach last Christmas and Sunbathing & Sailing on Christma afternoon. That is one of the 50 reasons why she wants us to emigrate to AUCKLAND (NZ) after we are married ! Pleased you enjoyed the Presentation !
Blessings & Joy to You & Jolly Holly Hound
Love in the SPIRIT Brian & Angela 💚🧡💚🧡💚
Yes - why does it always snow every Dec 25th? - going by a lot of Christmas cards?! lol.
THNAKS UNCLE STEVE ! Tht is another URBAN MYTH ! In Southern England we hardly ever get SNOW on Christmas Day ! one Year ~ I Brian wasin Puebla Mexico for Christmas and I was sunbatthing on the Flat Roof of my Friends house ! But all the Christmas Cards had snow on them ! Its the same with Cmas Cards that Angela & I get from NZ & OZ (Which is on fire & 50C = 122F) which often have Snowscenes and its the middle of Summer !
Blessings & Christmas Joy to You & Funny Fido (does he like TURKEY ?)
Love in the Spirit BRIAN & ANGELA 💚🧡💚🧡💚🧡💚
Angela here now & send her Love - Weve been invited to Friends for A CURRY !
A very nice seasonal piece. Lots of snow, yet still warm.
Angus dei ~ Lamb of God
Ex animo, Alan
HI ALAN ~ OOOPS Ive posted a comment again instead of a REPLY ~ PLEASE CHECK ~ Thanks B !
Thanks for your comment ALAN ~ Brian here ~ Angela is earning a crust in the warm AQUATHERAPY POOL with her Clients ! nice work if yiu can get it ! 25 December is the official Birthday of Jesus ~ AD O ! Its tough in the Northern Hemisphere for shopping & travelling etc !
Angela was in AUCKLAND NZ last year for Christmas & Enjoyed it ! 30C = 77F Sunbathing & Sailing ! She wants to emigrate asap ! I want us to start our Family First and then think about it !
Blessings & Peace to You & Yours
Love BRIAN & ANGELA 💚🧡💚🧡💚
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