Heart-Breakers..

Fay Slimm.

 

 

 

Heart-Breakers.

 

I, looking to now
..........................may see icy goodbyes.

Cold can scribe lonely
...............................but for only a while.

 

Sudden knows nothing
...............................of season's timing.

Parting heals better
........................when sunk by ebb-tides.

 

Tho' drifts of bleak past
.................. may heighten grief's waves.

Sun melts the quicker
......................betrayal's heart-breakers.

 

Yet new dawns ahead 
.........................can warm solo's corner.

When birdsong begins
....................hurt wings will spring-soar.

  • Author: Fay Slimm. (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 3rd, 2020 04:31
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments5

  • Michael Edwards

    Great format - great write.

  • orchidee

    Good write Fay.

  • FineB

    Hello Fay,

    A good write and wonderfully atmospheric and vivid.

    Keep writing FineB

  • myself and me

    "Tho' drifts of bleak past
    .................. may heighten grief's waves"
    Splendid, indeed.

  • ANGELA & BRIAN

    ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Fay - Great choice of Picture (Melancholy) to ameliorate the Poem ! Love the the structure of the Poem - such FLOW & RHYTHM !
    Grieving for a loved One is always more intense in WINTER - when the days are not only LONELY but COLD also ! However when SPRING comes and we see signs of RESSURECTION and our grieving in a New Light ! And a promise of togetherness again ! In Love & Loss every Season has its own compensation - AMEN !

    Blessines & Peace & Joy & Love !
    Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
    ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก



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