Heart-Breakers..

Fay Slimm.

Heart-Breakers.

I, looking to now
..........................may see icy goodbyes.

Cold can scribe lonely
...............................but for only a while.

Sudden knows nothing
...............................of season's timing.

Parting heals better
........................when sunk by ebb-tides.

Tho' drifts of bleak past
.................. may heighten grief's waves.

Sun melts the quicker
......................betrayal's heart-breakers.

Yet new dawns ahead
.........................can warm solo's corner.

When birdsong begins
....................hurt wings will spring-soar.

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Comments +

Michael Edwards January 3rd, 2020 04:53
Great format - great write.
orchidee January 3rd, 2020 05:01
Good write Fay.
FineB January 3rd, 2020 06:05
Hello Fay,

A good write and wonderfully atmospheric and vivid.

Keep writing FineB
myself and me January 3rd, 2020 12:23
"Tho' drifts of bleak past
.................. may heighten grief's waves"
Splendid, indeed.
ANGELA & BRIAN January 3rd, 2020 18:29
ANGELA HERE - Good Evening Fay - Great choice of Picture (Melancholy) to ameliorate the Poem ! Love the the structure of the Poem - such FLOW & RHYTHM !
Grieving for a loved One is always more intense in WINTER - when the days are not only LONELY but COLD also ! However when SPRING comes and we see signs of RESSURECTION and our grieving in a New Light ! And a promise of togetherness again ! In Love & Loss every Season has its own compensation - AMEN !

Blessines & Peace & Joy & Love !
Yours ANGELA & BRIAN
🧡💙🧡💙🧡

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