Next time I will swarm and be what was there
To be some how fate has been away, left my
Destiny behind for now time to become what
Was left undone restrung taught pitch perfect

This time reborn left the hive, alive feeling the
Vibe focused transfixed destination goal going
To swallow you whole this body eternal soul
Much to do first in line no time to queue

Right now, time to partake shake the tree by
The roots family values reconfigured thought 
About digested then ignored, exploring me
A leaf on the everlasting eternal tree

For now no one is more important than me
Gave my all before and was always ignored
Had an epiphany a resurgence inside am free
To be whole I have needed to shatter like
Broken delf and piece by piece reconfigured 

Next time, then this time, it is right now just
Became whole owned my goal complete time
To smile the journey looking back was worth
The pain, I may bend but shall never break.


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    yet again one of the greatest poets I have ever known & read has posted a complex & supremely exquisite poem & not one other poet on this 'alleged' great poetry site forum has thought to express their opinion.

    I guess this is why so many of us no longer consider MPS as our primary poetry location.


    • ZIGGY

      Unsub hi wow high praise indeed not sure I deserve it but coming from you I will lap it up lol, I know what you mean, if I get a comment I will comment back eventually, if I take the time to read a post the comment is the easiest part,, zigs

    • Maxine Smith

      Love the message, the end justifies the means ‘was worth the pain’
      Great flow, great work, well done.

      • ZIGGY

        Well hello there thanks so much for reading and the great reply

        • Maxine Smith

          Your welcome.

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