GOD IS OUR GUIDE ๐Ÿงก ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿ’™ A BLANK VERSE PANTOUM

ANGELA & BRIAN



 

GOD IS OUR GUIDE ~ AS WE TRUST HIM TOGETHER ~ DAY BY DAY ~ AMEN

 

GOD is always NEAR to guide us

He assures US our Daily Needs

He guiudes US into Peaceful Places

He makes the Rough Places Smooth !

 

He assures US our Daily Needs

He guides US into a Pure Life

He makes the Rough Places Smooth

He maintains our Spiritual Life !

 

He guides US into a Pure Life

With GOD WE have ~ NO Fear of Death

He maintains our Spiritual Life

He prepares our Place in Heaven !

 

With GOD we have ~ NO Fear of Death

He guides US in Peaceful Places

He prepares our Place in Heaven

GOD is always Near to GUIDE US !

 

Thanks for visiting ~ comments welcome ~ Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

 

This Poem is a paraphrase on PSALM 23 presented as a BLANK VERSE Pantoum

In Blank Verse there is NO Rhyme but Strict Metre. In this case it is Iambic

Pentameter ~ EIGHT syllables to a line ! As in a Rhymed Pantoum the 2nd & 4th 

lines of V1. become the 1st & 3rd lines of V2. In order that every line is

repeated Lines 1 & 3 of V1. become Lines 4 & 2 of the final verse. So the POEM 

effectively ENDS where it BEGINS !  Repetition is very important in Classical

Poetry to emphasise the MESSAGE of the POEM ~ OK  Love A & B ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

  • Author: ANGELA & BRIAN (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 13th, 2020 05:16
  • Category: Reflection
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Comments6

  • orchidee

    A fine write B&A.

    • ANGELA & BRIAN

      OOPS ~ Oncle Steve ~ weve sent a comment again ~ instead of a reply ~ please check POEM ~ B & A !

    • ANGELA & BRIAN

      Thanks Uncle Steve ~ For your positive support of Poems with a Spiritual Theme & thanks again for your Spiritual Postings each Day. A lot of what Angela & I see as Divine Guidence & Providence (because it has been a matter of Prayer !) others see as mere coincidence ~ because theirs is a very Physical 3D Universe ~ with NO Spiritual Dimension !

      Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS & FIDO - FIDIBUS !
      Love in the SPIRIT ~ ANGEAL & BRIAN
      ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

    • ron parrish aka wordman

      if we don`t get in the way

      • ANGELA & BRIAN

        GOOD MORNING RON ~ Thanks for your apt comment ! Every True Christian Believer is indwelt by the Holy Spirit who is our GUIDE from within ! BUT ! By our (sinful) actions we can QUENCE the Spirit & grieve the SPIRIT ! SO ! Our aim & objective should be to LIVE SPIRITUALLY ! NOT after the FLESH but after the SPIRIT ~ AMEN ! Every Morning ANGELA & I (She is living with Her Parents till APRIL ~ Marriage) Pray to be filled with the Holy Spirit and walk Spiritually ! AMEN !

        Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
        Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก

        • ron parrish aka wordman

          well i`m sure it will come

        • Goldfinch60

          My faith in the christian god has completely gone, if what you say in your words about your god will assure us of our daily needs why did it put Joyce through such an awful time. It just wasn't there for her and she had worshipped and sung its praises all her long life.
          The christian god is a myth!!

        • ANGELA & BRIAN

          Good Morning ~ Thanks for your comment UNCLE ANDY ! We are your Friends and because of Losses in our own Immediate Families We can empathise. We have seen some Chioce Saints DIE PEACEFULLY and some (like JOYCE) have suffered aweful PAIN & disability and some tragically have died Young. We have to see Gods Will in every situation. However neither of US have suffered the INTIMATE LOSS that You have ! If ANGELA were to be taken (after a very painful illness) I cannot predict uts effect on MY FAITH so I cannot JUDGE ! In our Poem we just tried to express how OUR Relationship with OUR GOD (Father - Son - Holy Spirit) helps us to be better People and Serve the CHURCH & the COMMUNITY. We support YOU in your FAITH that JOYCE is in the Spirit World and that one day (When your time comes) BOTH your SPIRITS will be reunited again ~ free from all pain & sorrow ! WE trust you are still attending Church ~ singing in the Choir and enjoying the Fellowship of Your Friends & other Members ! You dont have to BELIEVE to be BLESSED !

          Every Blessing & Peace to YOU & YOURS
          LOVE BRIAN & ANGELA ๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™

        • Thoughts In Time

          Amen to that He will never leave you or forsake you๐Ÿ™๐Ÿ™

          • ANGELA & BRIAN

            Thanks FRIEND ~ Pleased you enjoyed & appreciated it ! Love the *Praying Hands* It is important @ the start of EACH DAY to Pray for Gods Guidence and @ the end of EACH DAY to thank Him for it. And of course during Each Day to keep in touch with GOD ~ AMEN !

            Blessings & Peace to YOU & YOURS
            Love ANGELA & BRIAN ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿงก



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