Bright side

Poetic Dan



I think I found my balance, in the seeds I sowed long ago.

 

I guess I'm still not over every time they have to go...

 

Part time dad, full time father.

 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 19th, 2020 07:03
  • Comment from author about the poem: My children are one of the main reason I write & struggle in life. This was their first weekend back from new year and those two weeks I struggled to find the balance they had given me over the holidays. For the responsibility is heavy but to not have it feels empty, my balance I guess is finding the strength they and I need to be. Blessed am I but yet still struggle to see, all that lay in front of me. Much peace and respect, thanks for joining me!
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  • dusk arising

    Your youngest is absolutely adorable Dan.
    We are all part-timers i think Dan. Too much of a good thing would leave us unappreciative.

    • Poetic Dan

      She truly is my friend and as I sit in the back of the car after dropping the older ones back, I see clearly where my mind has been.

      Always appreciate your time

    • orchidee

      A fine write Dan.

      • Poetic Dan

        Always appreciated my friend

      • Nicholas Browning

        May the balance treat you well, Dan.

        • Poetic Dan

          It did for the weekend! Just got to keep it!
          Always appreciated

        • Nemo

          Super dad ♥️🌹

          • Poetic Dan

            Not sure on that but definitely a step up from what I was shown!

            Always appreciated
            Much peace and respect

          • Fay Slimm.

            A wonderful few minutes with your gorgeous family Dan - what a lovely group to father and am sure you are the kindest of Dads.

            • Poetic Dan

              I do not hit that's for sure but I have had my lesson of growing more peaceful. The one thing I know is in 100% truthful and ill never stop being proud of journey.

              Thank you for joining us and your kind words, always appreciated.

              Much peace and respect

            • kevin browne

              Your stance as a father figure showing pure delight in the fact that you stand tall and strong inbetween the children you have raised and raised by a proper loving and caring father who kust know how to carry across the word of love. Keep loving, my freind...

              • Poetic Dan

                I'm not the greatest but I'm definitely me, thank you for seeing the spirit that lives deep within me.

                Always appreciated my friend

                • kevin browne

                  You're such a gem and a beautiful soul indeed. Your spirit is very vibrant and everlasting love so keep the good work up...!!!

                • Goldfinch60

                  You are really coming to terms with your life Dan, it is wonderful to see it coming to fruition.

                  • Poetic Dan

                    Slowly I think I am 10 more years and I may be there, wherever there is!

                    Always appreciated my friend

                  • FineB

                    Hello Poetic Dan,

                    A good write and your coping very well.

                    An enchanting child you have.

                    Keep writing FineB

                    • Poetic Dan

                      Good morning, thank you very much!

                      I do feel a bit enchanted by them all...

                      Always appreciate your time

                      Much peace and respect



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