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cayo hueso

though a sea of guilt  so deep surrounds me   i am at peace beneath the swell of dreams that rise to drown me   i am  so profoundly sorry  for how you found me  laid out along the sea washed ashore alone without your arms around me

Comments3

  • Nicholas Browning

    This is quite short, but I like it. "The swell of dreams that rise to drown me", as if the author refuses to sink any deeper. A nice read.

  • ANGELA & BRIAN

    Angela here (I share this site with Brian my Fiance) Im 31 and a Physiotherapist. I am qualified in Acupuncture & Aromatherapy both od which are *Alternative Medicine* in the UK ! Your choice of title is interesting ! CAYO HUESO (Bone Cay) is a Cultural Centre in Havana Cuba ! Brian & I have visited CUBA and really enjoyed it we are both competent in Spanish - A beautiful Language. You will find MPS an empathetic site (Mainly US & UK) and it operates by reading & commenting on each others Poems.
    This is an elegant poem with an intriguing double rhyme - Surrounds me - Drowns me - Found me - Around me ! The poem has good meter which makes it a delight to recite ! Short Poems are always best !
    You have classified it as REFLECTION but I think there is a touch of MELANCHOLY as well ! Thanks for sharing - more please. It must be stimulating to live in the Bronx NY NY. We live close enough to LONDON UK to take advantage iof the Culture !

    Love Peace & Joy
    Yours ANGELA 🧡🧡🧡
    Please check our SITE thanks ANGELA !

  • Goldfinch60

    Very good emotive write.
    Welcome to MPS.



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