circle of trees

dusk arising

 


inside the circle of trees i wander
to rest upon softest turf
inside the circle of trees i wonder
upon the softness of love

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Comments6

  • Goldfinch60

    Inside that circle of trees I wander,
    Into the words of your wonder.

    • dusk arising

      It was the circle of trees the BBC TV use sometimes between programs gave me this vision.

    • orchidee

      A fine write DA.

    • Poetic Dan

      That I do! Great work

      • dusk arising

        do what?

        • Poetic Dan

          Wonder through the trees, finding comfort when on my knees, when circled by the leaves....

        • Fay Slimm.

          Great use of the words which although almost the same spelling mean so differently from each other - I love this one D.A. - saved of course.

          • dusk arising

            I'm honoured that you found something in this so simple a piece. Thank you Fay.

          • markziff

            Says so much, with no more than needed. Brilliant.

            • dusk arising

              Thank you Markziff. I'm a fan of very short pieces though i dont always manage to be so concise.

            • Neville

              super would be an understatement...

              Neville



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