inside the circle of trees i wander
to rest upon softest turf
inside the circle of trees i wonder
upon the softness of love
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dusk arising (
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Inside that circle of trees I wander,
Into the words of your wonder.
It was the circle of trees the BBC TV use sometimes between programs gave me this vision.
A fine write DA.
Thank u Mr O
That I do! Great work
do what?
Wonder through the trees, finding comfort when on my knees, when circled by the leaves....
Great use of the words which although almost the same spelling mean so differently from each other - I love this one D.A. - saved of course.
I'm honoured that you found something in this so simple a piece. Thank you Fay.
Says so much, with no more than needed. Brilliant.
Thank you Markziff. I'm a fan of very short pieces though i dont always manage to be so concise.
super would be an understatement...
Neville
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