Unforgettable.
We pair of home-comers
built water-tight daring from lonely tears,
we painted an idyll of caught bubbles
in leaky trust where care would cover old fears.
Oh that happy hand-in-glove fit
that we dared admit as regenerative pleasure
when autumn relaxed to abnormal finish
while I untangled lost years of regret.
Such easy laughter sparked need
to spend newly-found treasure on richer
moments of tending completeness
as youth-fresh growth we wove from aridity.
Your tenderness stoked heat
of forgotten furnace, blazed pathways to places
I never had been, lit fires that seared
heaven into dreary existence without dire haste.
Such welcome release to taste desire,
freedom unleashed exciting steps
as waiting the chance to climb ardour's height
I thrived in sweet air of acceptability.
You sculpted my pallid composure,
restructured a future, accessed the girl inside
and unfastened this latched-up conformer
to match your own extra tactile
spirit which let loose abandon I did not refuse.
Beautiful man your love smeared
warmth on every cold fold of denial's insistence,
toned any slack in compatible essence
and de-misted my near-sighted myopic signals.
Oiled romance honed compatibility,
our duo-joining owned bonds more than flesh,
feelings reached otherness bliss
and coupled yield I shall ever remember.
No ocean of parting can break
hearts' devotion and I know for a certainty
our souls remain tied and we shall meet again.
Oh unforgettable man you stole
into destiny, led me to love, captured my soul,
and now you hold it forever.
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Author:
Fay Slimm. (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Wrote a while ago for someone special who had found and then lost a long-awaited love to sudden death.
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Comments7
A good write Fay.
Many thanks Orchi my friend.
I found this really really moving. You touch places where the concealed yearning in older singles cries out to be touched and sated.
Life is wonderful, life is cruel, life is love.
Yes dear friend there is much loneliness in older ones and the poem touches on just one of the challenges of needy singles. Thanks so much for your visit and comment.
It was good to read this today....Fay. Your usual 'putting music to words without the notes'
Unforgettabubble.
Ex animo, Alan
Your kind comment is much appreciated dear Alan and thank you for the smile you left too to brighten the subject of Unforgetta - - -bubble.
This was an emotional read.
Wonderfully written 🌹
Your visit and comment on Unforgettable is much appreciated Nemo.
BRIAN HERE - Good Evening FAY ! Once again in an exqusite Love Song you have mirrored all that I hope to share & experience with Angela when we are married ! For Spiritual Rasons we have only sipped the Aperitif of our Love. But we have been more than staisfied till we EXTERIENCE the Full Menu ! Each verse brings us neaarer to the fulfilment of experiental Love ~ Beautiful !
I trust that when ~ at the appointed Time ~ I pass from the Pysical to the Spiritual dimension ~Angela could read this ~ as an Testimony to ME ~ AMEN !
Blessings & Peace & Joy
LOVE ~ BRIAN 💜💜💜
A big thank you for the kind comment on my posting dear Brian - - pleased too that you found the tender love song of Unforgettable so appealing.
Tears come to me where words do not, thank you. 😢
Thank you for your visit to my page and poem Mark - so pleased you liked the read of Unforgettable and thank you indeed for your welcome comment.
Beautiful emotive write Fay, that love will go on for eternity.
Andy
Thanking you in total agreement about the foreverness of true love dear Andy.
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