Fay Slimm

Unforgettable.

 

 

Unforgettable.

 

We pair of home-comers  

built water-tight daring from lonely tears,

we painted an idyll of caught bubbles

in leaky trust where care would cover old fears.

 

Oh that happy hand-in-glove fit

that we dared admit as regenerative pleasure

when autumn relaxed to abnormal finish

while I untangled lost years of regret.

 

Such easy laughter sparked need

to spend newly-found treasure on richer 

moments of tending completeness

as youth-fresh growth we wove from aridity.

 

Your tenderness stoked heat

of forgotten furnace, blazed pathways to places

I never had been, lit fires that seared 

heaven into dreary existence without dire haste.

 

Such welcome release to taste desire,

freedom unleashed exciting steps 

as waiting the chance to climb ardour's height

I thrived in sweet air of acceptability.

 

You sculpted my pallid composure,

restructured a future, accessed the girl inside

and unfastened this latched-up conformer 

to match your own extra tactile 

spirit which let loose abandon I did not refuse.

 

Beautiful man your love smeared

warmth on every cold fold of denial's insistence,

toned any slack in compatible essence 

and de-misted my near-sighted myopic signals.

 

Oiled romance honed compatibility,

our duo-joining owned bonds more than flesh,

feelings reached otherness bliss

and coupled yield I shall ever remember.

 

No ocean of parting can break

hearts' devotion and I know for a certainty

our souls remain tied and we shall meet again.

 

Oh unforgettable man you stole

into destiny, led me to love, captured my soul,    

and now you hold it forever.

 

Comments8

  • orchidee

    A good write Fay.

    • Fay Slimm

      Many thanks Orchi my friend.

    • dusk arising

      I found this really really moving. You touch places where the concealed yearning in older singles cries out to be touched and sated.
      Life is wonderful, life is cruel, life is love.

      • Fay Slimm

        Yes dear friend there is much loneliness in older ones and the poem touches on just one of the challenges of needy singles. Thanks so much for your visit and comment.

      • Maxine Smith

        Beautiful and moving, such an emotive read Fay.
        For sure โ€˜shall meet againโ€™
        Wonderfully written as always.

        • Fay Slimm

          Hello Maxine - bless you for your understanding and welcome comment on my posting of Unforgettable - -am glad that the read was meaningful to you for we all need to feel for the loneliness of elderly ones. Thank you for your visit and read.

        • Alan .S. Jeeves

          It was good to read this today....Fay. Your usual 'putting music to words without the notes'
          Unforgettabubble.

          Ex animo, Alan

          • Fay Slimm

            Your kind comment is much appreciated dear Alan and thank you for the smile you left too to brighten the subject of Unforgetta - - -bubble.

          • Nemo

            This was an emotional read.
            Wonderfully written ๐ŸŒน

            • Fay Slimm

              Your visit and comment on Unforgettable is much appreciated Nemo.

            • ANGELA & BRIAN

              BRIAN HERE - Good Evening FAY ! Once again in an exqusite Love Song you have mirrored all that I hope to share & experience with Angela when we are married ! For Spiritual Rasons we have only sipped the Aperitif of our Love. But we have been more than staisfied till we EXTERIENCE the Full Menu ! Each verse brings us neaarer to the fulfilment of experiental Love ~ Beautiful !
              I trust that when ~ at the appointed Time ~ I pass from the Pysical to the Spiritual dimension ~Angela could read this ~ as an Testimony to ME ~ AMEN !

              Blessings & Peace & Joy
              LOVE ~ BRIAN ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ๐Ÿ’œ

              • Fay Slimm

                A big thank you for the kind comment on my posting dear Brian - - pleased too that you found the tender love song of Unforgettable so appealing.

              • markziff

                Tears come to me where words do not, thank you. ๐Ÿ˜ข

                • Fay Slimm

                  Thank you for your visit to my page and poem Mark - so pleased you liked the read of Unforgettable and thank you indeed for your welcome comment.

                • Goldfinch60

                  Beautiful emotive write Fay, that love will go on for eternity.

                  Andy

                  • Fay Slimm

                    Thanking you in total agreement about the foreverness of true love dear Andy.



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