Unhuggable

Poetic Dan

Feeling destroyed but still here. 

 

Does this mean you've conquered fear! 

 

Or a bag of bones you don't go near. 

 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 27th, 2020 06:48
  • Comment from author about the poem: I often push people away but when you feel like I do, it's as if you're asking a ice cube to stay warm!
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Comments3

  • orchidee

    They would melt you with their hugs! That dog there need a hug? I'm on my way to him (her?).

    • Poetic Dan

      Actually dogs never do hugs and even the ones that look like the do like it probably are not! We can look something else on the outside, and as for the ice no warm hugs aloud!

      Always appreciate your time my friend

    • FineB

      A wonderful and vivid write!

      Thanks Poetic Dan.

      There is a lot of love out there in this complex world and the key is not pushing those away whose love for us is genuine.

      Keep writing FineB

      • Poetic Dan

        Thank you so much and I guess that's my problem, I don't even have Faith in the genuine. Or maybe I just don't recognise it, like I wrote above. How do you know what you never had or lost!

        Thanks for the inspiration
        Keep up the write
        Much peace and respect

      • Goldfinch60

        With your mind filled with your words you are always huggable Dan.

        • Poetic Dan

          Ha! Only on the outside friend, on the inside it's terrified of all things I can imagine.... That's a lot lol

          Always appreciated my friend



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