Lovescape.
I am soft-sift in thine hands.
Fast as in an hourglass the drift
toward fortunes of intimate fancy
begin as kisses scorch expectant skin.
I am drawn to thy courtship.
Fired by a moth-soft voice I try
to view in thine a whispered desire
of vow to out-ride my female shyness.
I am much beguiled by need.
Burnt to a frazzle in heat's bowl,
near stupefied by fire's rabid heave
resistance forsooth wilts to Cupid's role.
I am seared by thy fervour.
Bathed in amour's lusty lovescape
errant bliss gains fast pace for a certain
I thee favour thus shalt herewith capitulate.
Therefore I bid thee make haste.
- Author: Fay Slimm. ( Offline)
- Published: February 5th, 2020 05:20
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 63
Comments6
Blimey.... to think how language matured over the years... in the parlance of the sixties this would have become "Come and get me big boy".
But am i in a quandary over which is the most romantic? Nay, forsooth, thou hast cast a spell upon which to tarry whilst the very warmth therein pervades my breast.
Ha ha --- well I'm sure the lady in question would have used that phrase if she'd have known it D.A. - yea forsooth I thank thee a load for thy stopping by on my page and thine input to Lovescape.
A fine write Fay.
Many thanks Orchi.
So very nice, again, Fay. A most enjoyable read and the language is wonderful.
Ex animo, Alan
Glad you like the archaic Alan - I favour the delicate usage of olde English at times with a subject like Lovescape. Thank you muchly for your kind comment.
Beautiful write Queen Fay.
Andy
Ha ha - - Queen of fancy's imagination that's me dear friend. Bless you dear Andy for this smile of a comment.
A moth to a flame Fay wonderful piece Bravo!
Yes a moth to a flame that dear lady must be but pity her future with such gallants as those knights in armour eh ? - - Glad you liked the read of Lovescape dear Andrew.
I would be with thee now my Lady if not for these angry storms here now, this knight abhors and true...…
verily well writ and tempting to venture out write now By Saint John..
N
Ha ha - I know surely thou art a sturdy Gallant who braves storms and wind for thy Lady so I say again mine leige "" I bid thee make haste." afore the burden of waiting give way.... - howszat then !
I have just come over all unnecessary......
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