Daydream Believer

Together

 

I, so grateful,

so inspired by you.

You, who ignite the dark,

with a love so true.

Me, who had fallen to her knees.

We, who found away to make life feel a breeze.

Comments4

  • Neville

    Delightful.... There is a very lucky guy out there somewhere for sure....Oh' and welcome to MPS... I sincerely hope more will find you and soon.
    N

    • Daydream Believer

      Thank you for being so kind and reading my poems. I actually joined almost a year ago. I just didn’t have the courage in the end to share any works. But recently decided to dip my toes and try. You just made my day. Thank you so much

      • Neville

        believe in yourself my friend...

      • 2 more comments

      • Fay Slimm.

        A tender love message and written with skill - - he will surely read and respond to this charming confession of happiness at being together. Keep writing Daydreamer.

        • Daydream Believer

          Fay, thank you for your wonderful words which give me great encouragement. Love can be a splendid thing indeed. I am so grateful for your read and comment today

        • Goldfinch60

          May you be together forever and your love grows each moment.

          • Daydream Believer

            Goldfinch60, thank you for your truly kind words and good will. They are greatly received. Many thanks for reading my poems today and leaving such kind comments

          • dusk arising

            Brought to me the warmth of love shared, lives entwined. Happiness.

            • Daydream Believer

              Such a beautiful comment, thank you so much. Love can truly lift a person and make life so much better. Thanks for the comment and reading my poem



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