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Before I managed
To escape
And found myself
I was a mere reflection
In a mirror
On someone else’s shelf
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Author:
Neville (
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Clever my friend this turnabout word which had me working out what it meant before I read your verse. Finding oneself seems to need facing forward and inward after that jump off the shelf eh .......... will try that today......... x
Thank thee my lady F.. a much appreciated visit and then some …. Neville
Hahaha fantastic, I didn't see that one coming. Always appreciated!
Thanks Dan, must appreciated...
Short, sweet and a powerful message. From ocean to ocean, from sea to sea. I found, there's only one me.
thank you kindly
Neville
Pathos! I thought i'd found myself long ago but only recently it dawned on me that at last i really have.
Your piece today is very clever, thought provoking and downright funny all at the same time. Top marks mate. Into my fav's.
thank you sir and kindly.. I am truly honoured...
Neville
A fine write N. I saw myself coming back from town one day, before I had even got there. Same sort of thing, or am I spouting rubbish?! heehee.
Nah.. you are making perfect sense.... N... almost forgot.. thanks O..
Thanks N. I first read the title a 'Not it self-er'. Geddit?!
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Such a lot said in so few words. I don’t think I have quite left that shelf yet. Need to though
Thank you for this thought provoking clever short. Sometimes our very selves are staring right into our faces.
I liked this, thank you
I am delighted you found this little scribble.. thank you DB... N
Simple, soulful 🙂
Simply grateful and true 😎
That reflection does not show the real you that others see, and the one we see writes these clever words.
Andy
Much appreciated my friend, very much indeed, thank you loads,
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