Hold on if you can

Poetic Dan



If you hang on I promise it will get better

 

Sorry at this moment I'm in stormy weather

 

Caught up in my tangles of never & forever

 

Right now we are forging an unbreakable tether

 

No matter where we go our souls locked together

 

A lighthouse at sea ready to brave an unfathomable me

 

Even when I'm drowning you jump right in

 

A mermaid, a queen with a warriors spirit to see

 

I am the best and the worst at almost everything

 

The Genie in a bottle, a God that helps you sing

 

As never will you leave the bed without smiling

 

Muffins for breakfast and even lunch, then I'll be in Australia to camp up!

 

If you continue to ride theses waves with me, the rough days will feel like a breeze

 

Making us stronger than we could ever believe, just keep holding my heart as I have no sleeve

 

  • Author: Poetic Dan (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 10th, 2020 07:43
  • Comment from author about the poem: Just being me sharing my ramblings and feeling, no relationship is easy but should always be worth it! Thank you for your time, keep up the rhymes. What does not kill us makes us stronger, if we can read between the lines ;) let the music in and you'll start to feel divine
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  • Fay Slimm.

    A fantastic write Dan - -a very appealing read and I love all the clever rhyming.

    • Poetic Dan

      Thank you my dear, its rolls right of the tongue when your around the right ones.

      Always appreciate your time

    • Mil57Man

      Poetic Dan. You're the man.

      • Poetic Dan

        Stop it I'll blush and with hair like mine they all rush! Takes one to know one, keep strutting your stuff!

        Always appreciate your time
        See you on the other side

      • dusk arising

        What a wonderful treat for your beloved to see these words from your heart. I guess she is a quite special person..... does she write poetry? or play guitar like Hendrix? What's her secret to stop you driving her crazy?

        • Poetic Dan

          I read this in my office (car outside the house) laughing so loud, it felt like the wind had stopped!

          Funny thing is she has not seen it yet but when I thought of her reply to her secret, it came out in Portuguese! Some of it I understood some I did not...guess that when someone can know you better than you know your self!

          My friend its always a pleasure to hear your mind, I didn't even know that to say about 'those' things as some smarts aren't mind 😉

          Keep up the write buddy, thanks again for the chuckle only you can give!

        • Nemo

          Beautiful write Dan, 🌹

          • Poetic Dan

            Only a fraction of her beauty, sometimes the best thing about love is, words can fail!

            Always appreciated
            Have a great day my friend

          • Neville

            these are not simple ramblings my friend, take my word for it mate... You just done good.. damned good

            Neville

            • Poetic Dan

              They are if I still can't walk the talk, thank you so much for the positive vibe and inspiration for another write!

              Always appreciated
              Keep sailing!

            • Goldfinch60

              Such strong loving words I am sure that when she sees these words Dan that strength will increase into undying love of two soulmates.

              Andy

              • Poetic Dan

                I can only keep trying to show all she is worth my friend and I'm being shown by many great souls, how to keep up with my own goals!

                Thanks for your bit
                Forever appreciated

              • orchidee

                Good write Dan.

                • Poetic Dan

                  Thank you Good sir
                  Have a fantastic day!



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