If you hang on I promise it will get better
Sorry at this moment I'm in stormy weather
Caught up in my tangles of never & forever
Right now we are forging an unbreakable tether
No matter where we go our souls locked together
A lighthouse at sea ready to brave an unfathomable me
Even when I'm drowning you jump right in
A mermaid, a queen with a warriors spirit to see
I am the best and the worst at almost everything
The Genie in a bottle, a God that helps you sing
As never will you leave the bed without smiling
Muffins for breakfast and even lunch, then I'll be in Australia to camp up!
If you continue to ride theses waves with me, the rough days will feel like a breeze
Making us stronger than we could ever believe, just keep holding my heart as I have no sleeve
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Just being me sharing my ramblings and feeling, no relationship is easy but should always be worth it! Thank you for your time, keep up the rhymes. What does not kill us makes us stronger, if we can read between the lines ;) let the music in and you'll start to feel divine
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A fantastic write Dan - -a very appealing read and I love all the clever rhyming.
Thank you my dear, its rolls right of the tongue when your around the right ones.
Always appreciate your time
Poetic Dan. You're the man.
Stop it I'll blush and with hair like mine they all rush! Takes one to know one, keep strutting your stuff!
Always appreciate your time
See you on the other side
What a wonderful treat for your beloved to see these words from your heart. I guess she is a quite special person..... does she write poetry? or play guitar like Hendrix? What's her secret to stop you driving her crazy?
I read this in my office (car outside the house) laughing so loud, it felt like the wind had stopped!
Funny thing is she has not seen it yet but when I thought of her reply to her secret, it came out in Portuguese! Some of it I understood some I did not...guess that when someone can know you better than you know your self!
My friend its always a pleasure to hear your mind, I didn't even know that to say about 'those' things as some smarts aren't mind 😉
Keep up the write buddy, thanks again for the chuckle only you can give!
Beautiful write Dan, 🌹
Only a fraction of her beauty, sometimes the best thing about love is, words can fail!
Always appreciated
Have a great day my friend
these are not simple ramblings my friend, take my word for it mate... You just done good.. damned good
Neville
They are if I still can't walk the talk, thank you so much for the positive vibe and inspiration for another write!
Always appreciated
Keep sailing!
Such strong loving words I am sure that when she sees these words Dan that strength will increase into undying love of two soulmates.
Andy
I can only keep trying to show all she is worth my friend and I'm being shown by many great souls, how to keep up with my own goals!
Thanks for your bit
Forever appreciated
Good write Dan.
Thank you Good sir
Have a fantastic day!
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