Remarkably Unfinished
Discover me
She said
Then celebrate
Each
Find you make
Along
The way and
Mark them
With a x
Oh’ yes she said
Explore
And contemplate
Each
Rise and fall
Each turn and curve
Each
Cleft and crease
And subtle dip
Examine me
With fingertips
And eyes and lips
Then
Let me go and freely
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Author:
Neville (
Offline) - Published: February 11th, 2020 04:56
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Comments6
Wow - what normal female would want release after that intimate but unfinished discovery - yet another subtle example of gentle erotica Nev and which I, for one, most thoroughly enjoyed ...............
Thank you my Lady F for such an encouraging thumbs up... I am at the local hospital eye department at the moment and my phone will not allow me to review for some reason.. I shall return the favour ASAP .... 🍷Neville
Should we (or I) meet her?! I might not be the same again, if I did - I may never recover from it.
I would leave well alone, but I shall tell her you enquired andgive her your number ...😎 👍
Lost for words... Its a nice feeling, thanks for giving some Poetic healing!
Always appreciated
Lol
And cheers to you sir, many thanks indeed
Wonderful thoughts come to mind from your words Neville.
Andy
What a lovely thing to say... Many thank you’s Andy
Neville
Oh I like this... Although the ending... Being unfinished... After fingertips and eyes and lips. Almost cruel. Great subtle erotica. Enjoyed this one.
I am thrilled my friend and truly... thank you so much...
Neville
Yep, you gotta let 'em go otherwise you're cage-ing them. "If you love someone, set them free" as Sting sung.
Great flow to this piece today and delightful surprise finale.
am truly grateful for you visiting...
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