Jane Frye

In the amber light,
Just before the darkness of night,
The starlings took flight,
In a dazzling dance that took my breath away.
Synchronized in every sway
They whirled in waves every which way.
A mesmerizing aerial ballet.

A staggering thousand, maybe more
Flying in unison over the shore.
Dancing to music I'll never know,
For reasons beyond where my imagination can go.
An audience of one, with a tear-streaked face,
for witnessing such beauty...such grace.

  • Author: Jane Frye (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 14th, 2020 02:42
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  • Saxon Crow

    Beautiful poem. The murmeration of birds is completely hypnotising and spellbinding. An ocean of wings on the deep blue sky!

    • Jane Frye

      Spellbinding and hypnotising; good words to describe murmurations. Watching them moved me. Thank you for taking the time to read and comment on my poem.

    • Goldfinch60

      Those murmurations of starlings are one of the most wonderful sites in the world. I can understand the 'tear-streaked face' as I am pulled into tears of wonder at the sight of this beauty.


      • Jane Frye

        Thank you, Andy. I hope we never fail to be awed by nature.

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