Irrevocable

ontheedge

An all consuming love that leaves me broken when you starve me of your attention.
When you became my protector you stripped me of my protection.
My strength is connected to yours and without yours I am weak.
Your happiness feeds mine, to please you I forever seek.
Your approval I need and without it I am worthless.
Faithfully yours, I'll forever be selfless.

  • Author: ontheedge (Offline Offline)
  • Published: February 18th, 2020 03:51
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  • dusk arising

    Reading between the lines of this you certainly devalue your worth in your own estimation. Or are you being manipulated by a player?

    It all comes thru the mood picture you have created in this piece.

  • ANGELA & BRIAN

    GOOD MORNING FRIEND - Welcome to MPS - It is an empathetic site as many Members are *On The Edge* (good pen name) for one reason or another. BRIAN & I are getting married in April and all the Planning and buying our first House etc puts one nearer & nearer to the edge ! As a RELATIONSHIP develops we do allow our Partner to consume us (and soem of our traits) and vice-versa. Brian & I try to work things out together withut losing our indiiduality and independence. The areas you mention are important both collectively and individually ! Love - Protection - Strength - Happiness - Approval & Self ! Male & Female are very different in so many ways - but it always *Takes Two to Tango* and we love Latin Dances ! Thanks for caring & sharing !

    Every Blessing now & in the Future
    Love Angela & Brian 💛💛💛
    Please check our site - Thanks A & B !

  • Goldfinch60

    There is no way you are weak when writing words like these, that strength will be forever within you as you lead your lives together.

    Welcome to MPS.



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