dusk arising

the polemical poet

you had to see it
to believe it
she said she didn't
enjoy argument
but argued
with three people
for four hours
asked to accept
to differ respecting
that everyone
was entitled to
their own opinion
she agreed then
went on to
criticise everyone
else's opinions
accusing them of
having negative
thoughts about
particular subjects
which had not even
been discussed
insisted that her way
was the only way
you had to see it
to believe it

I know two others
who saw it
and i bet
they don't believe it


  • The Uneducated O.A.P

    I wrote the poem and I definately don't believe it, Bet she's on her way here now !. I have now deleted the poem because it's just gone too far. Bill

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      Your poem was never meant to cause so much discussion but it is a shame you deleted but I totally understand why. To be honest I thoroughly enjoyed myself & really should have been working.

      Your poem was a great distraction & I thank you for it & apologise you’ve needed to remove it.

      Maybe post it again & I promise to only comment on your words & not those of any commentator.

      I do hope we have remained friends as no offence to you was ever intended.



      • The Uneducated O.A.P

        I didn't take offence at anything really and like you I enjoyed the discussion, I. Don't mind if people leave comments about comments it's just that it seemed to vear off into a different direction, a path I didn't want to go down, perhaps it was just me. To be honest as soon as I deleted it I wish I hadn't , because of the time people had spent reading and commenting. So no offence taken, not even from the woman of fun ! Bill

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        What fun it was today & I thank you for entertaining me all day. Not sure we resolved anything but I’ve had a ball!



      • Neville

        I suspect this to be a little masterpiece of poetic fact

        well penned my friend


        • The Uneducated O.A.P

          Thanks, I was reaching for the Valium at one point. Have a good evening, Bill

        • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸

          Gosh you had to go such lengths gahhh!! I didn't argue with three people, but if any amount of people write provocative or false things against me, Islam, or my reply I will definitely reply even if it takes so much time.. I didn't criticise , I just stated facts while three people criticised and said offending upsetting false things. I didn't accuse anyone but I was falsely accused .. And even if my religion Islam is the only truthful way I dint say actually say it like that..
          My poems are not polemical, they are universally agreeable, if someone doesn't agree with sth they are allowed to differ, NO FORCE OR COERCION EVEN WITH TRUTH AND FACTS, THATS MY WAY ALWAYS. Forceful shoving would be if I wrote sth like" Everyone has to , MUST believe this or that', I just state my facts and truths instead and anyone may or may not accept it. I just beg for rationality, peace, and fairness.

          • dusk arising

            Calm down calm down, we had enough of this earlier.

            • 🐤s.zaynab.kamoonpuri🌷😸

              Ok fine I'm calm till you say the next provocative thing. I hope it's not another false propaganda statement like Isis are Muslims beheading people. Or sth. Yes they maybe doing that but all Muslims condemn them as fakes and some even westerners told me they are puppets of some western agenda. I don't know who to trust among people nowadays without proofs, I rather just believe in God that's all. And in proven facts and truths. But I know for sure that Isis are not real Muslims.

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            • Saxon Crow

              Clearly i missed something! However, a very good poem. Believe it!

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                Oh you have no idea. It’s been a long day here in MPS & nobody has achieved anything yet; but there is hope.


                • The Uneducated O.A.P

                  Thanks people, I regret deleting it, I'll put it back on when things have calmed down a bit. Pity all the comments have been lost. It was an interesting day. Have fun Bill

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                • Goldfinch60

                  Belief is within oneself.

                  • The Uneducated O.A.P

                    Simple and very affective words , Hope you enjoyed the ride, I deleted the poem because I thought it was getting a bit too personal. Have fun Bill

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