There is a world I cannot see
but I know it lives,
It breathes a life of its own,
yet it's invisible to our naked understanding...
It lights in between love and hate,
as it exhales our evening contemplation
from a nocturnal expanse,
awaiting to sign off this preternatural wing
from our signature song,
where we are all determined to go...
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Author:
Gino (
Offline) - Published: February 27th, 2020 20:47
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I like to think this touches on the hereafter and afterlife. Whatever it is about its an awesome muse and a poem written superbly. Kudos.
Pls Pleez do read and comment my newest poem too.
Thank you so much s.zaynab.kamoonpuri. I will take a look at your newest poem
Very good write
Thank you Saxon Crow
Where we are determined to go can be a mystery to many people. Good write.
Andy
Thank you Andy, I appreciate your comment
Here you show us the human belief in another existence without touching the religious rhetoric in which many minds have become embedded.
An air of peace and security surrounds the faith revealed in this writing.
Top notch stuff.
Thank you so much dusk arising for your comment
Nice work..you always get ypur message through in such a limited amount of words..i can't do that..i am a wordy ass bitch. Lol..anyway..i was away for several months I got your message and phone number and I am definitely interested in hearing more about your publishong experience amd maybe some direction
You and many others are absolutely right.i just do something more w my work..i have lost south work in the past due to theft and other anomalies ..thats why i decided to start using this site so that I would have a devent body of work available that cannot be taken from me.amyway.i will contact you soon. 7753155831..thatts my number so I will know its me calling when I get around to it finally
Thanks for your comment Jason. Yeah having your work published is an awesome accomplishment, as I know many readers will enjoy your talent...
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