i am,all that i am

ron parrish aka wordman

i have come,

to the conclusion,

that i am all,

i`ll ever be.

i will never ,

feel my youth again,

but only in my dreams,

i am young .

a man ,

bearing,

a lot of,

broken dreams.

i always thought that,

i would conquer the world,

but now i realize ,it has conquered me,

that it has conquered me...

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dusk arising March 1st, 2020 17:03
A masterpiece! Pure brilliance!

I love this piece, it's composition, layout and message. Goes without saying this is you at your wordy best sir!

An absolute MUST for my favourites.

Thank you so much for sharing this with us on mps.
ron parrish aka wordman March 1st, 2020 17:18
thank you for the beautiful review
LIGHT WARRIOR March 1st, 2020 18:15
Very good work..of course if we set out to try and conquer something much more immense thn pirselves that ee will end up feeling conquered by that entity someday...it doesnt want to conquer you..just dust off and start again...lofe likes us to have to do that sometimes
- ron parrish aka wordmanMarch 1st, 2020 18:21
  but of course we do,but we all feel down sometimes,,,thank you
Goldfinch60 March 2nd, 2020 02:30
So true, we each become the person that we need to be.

Andy
Fay Slimm. March 2nd, 2020 05:12
This has to be one of your best Ron - - says it all without wincing - -
- ron parrish aka wordmanMarch 2nd, 2020 16:12
  thank you fay,funny how i don`t really think it`s all that good but the reviews says different
ron parrish aka wordman March 2nd, 2020 16:13

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