ron parrish aka wordman

i am,all that i am



i have come,

to the conclusion,

that i am all,

i`ll ever be.

 

i will never ,

feel my youth again,

but only in my dreams,

i am young .

 

a man ,

bearing,

a lot of,

broken dreams.

 

i always thought that,

 i would conquer the world,

but now i realize ,it has conquered me,

that it has conquered me...

Comments6

  • dusk arising

    A masterpiece! Pure brilliance!

    I love this piece, it's composition, layout and message. Goes without saying this is you at your wordy best sir!

    An absolute MUST for my favourites.

    Thank you so much for sharing this with us on mps.

  • ron parrish aka wordman

    thank you for the beautiful review

  • LIGHT WARRIOR

    Very good work..of course if we set out to try and conquer something much more immense thn pirselves that ee will end up feeling conquered by that entity someday...it doesnt want to conquer you..just dust off and start again...lofe likes us to have to do that sometimes

  • Goldfinch60

    So true, we each become the person that we need to be.

    Andy

  • Fay Slimm.

    This has to be one of your best Ron - - says it all without wincing - -

    • ron parrish aka wordman

      thank you fay,funny how i don`t really think it`s all that good but the reviews says different

    • ron parrish aka wordman



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