What is it about a river that soothes the soul!
Is it the constant flow, boundlessly moving and letting go
Is it the scenery that holds, endlessly containing never to fold
Is it the life that surrounds it, of many stories untold
I may never of met you or seen you for years
If you whisper the dragonfly will transport the fears
Until one by one each tear we become a better human
To stand as deep as the ocean for what we have done
All life is the power and inner beauty of creation
How complicated we can make this unique existence
With past, present and future all mixed in us at once
As every ripple got me here and will forever expand on
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Poetic Dan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Many thoughts in this...keep up the write! Much peace and respect, always appreciated.
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A fine write Dan.
Always appreciated my friend
So very true Dan, rivers can take us to places of wonder in our lives.
Andy
Unless your mind is stuck, then you'll see nothing at all. Just a empty vessel taking a stroll!
Wisdom in your words today Dan. Something must be in the March air for I wrote something spiritual today too.
A very life affirming piece.
Lol it was written yesterday and tested this morning walking the dogs at dawn, I got to meet the a GS many had told me about.... Let's just say, after I let it follow me showing the owner it had no control, I then walked out back to him and gave my views. He took it bet than I thought, as I don't really say things I could not back up there and then....
Life truly is a interesting ride! I'll now be honoured to see it from your side!
Always appreciate your time buddy
Cool flowing (see what I did there!) poem Dan. Rviers are so mesmerising
Great work!
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