Story of my life


Age 13 to present day age 31.

Raw, truth , my life. 

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  • Author: Renzi Mars (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 6th, 2020 09:20
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • dusk arising

    I know your old pals on here will join with me in saying our hearts go out to you Renzi. Willing you continued strength and will to overcome your injury and health setbacks.
    Thank you for giving us all this insight into what Renzi came through to become the 'sprite' of mps. Yep 'sprite' - there's something magical about you.

    Keep on holding it together fatty and when you feel together enough to throw us a line or two.... know that we are waiting with baited breath for it xx.

    • Renzi

      You're kindness always restores my faith in the human race, thankyou ♡ this weekend i plan to spend time reading through your and others great work on here. I needa get back into the swing of it.. back to the family.. have a nice wee weekend my friend, much love ♡

    • FredPeyer

      So great to see, hear, and read you again Renzi! I have been away a bit from MPS, but every so often thought about you and the others poets. I missed that quirky Irish girl!

    • Saxon Crow

      Amazingly raw poem. Talk about an honest share of your heart. Keep being strong one day at a time....

    • Goldfinch60

      Such an emotive write, as d a said, our hearts go out to you.
      You now have the strength to move forward in spite of your back. Your life has given you the strength. It is so good to see you back on here Renzi I do hope we see or hear more of your words.
      We are always here for you.


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