Biscuit?

Saxon Crow

There are days when I'm quite sensible

To all the strifes and woes

That this poor world has to deal with

And of people with their lows

 

There are days when I'm empathic

And full of concern and care

I give my time and attention

To show that I am there

 

There are days when I go loopy

And laugh at everything

Because it's all so farcical

This life we are living in

 

There are days when all I want to do

Is make people laugh and smile

I'll act the clown and run about

Like a sugar infested child

 

There are days when I talk waffle

And nothing makes any sense

Like this poem that I'm writing

It just proves I'm a, er, biscuit???!

 

  • Author: Saxon Crow (Offline Offline)
  • Published: March 13th, 2020 04:27
  • Comment from author about the poem: Haven\\\'t got a clue about this one!
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  • orchidee

    But not a fruit cake?! heehee.

    • Saxon Crow

      Each to their own Orchi. I won't judge

      • orchidee

        Aww, why is my nickname 'fruit' - as in cake?! lol.

      • dusk arising

        Your words explain that we are creatures of our moods.
        A biscuit brings pleasure and is often a token of sharing with visiting friends/callers.
        Given a choice, which type of biscuit would you be though?

        • Poetic Dan

          Jammie Dodger all the way! But see me as just a custard cream, bigger mistake to think I'm a richtea...

          Sorry could not help myself!

          • Saxon Crow

            Cheddar thin biscuit!!

            • Poetic Dan

              No one dunks you then.....

              • Saxon Crow

                Totally moreish actually! Haha

                • Goldfinch60

                  My Home made shortbread are the best as far as I am concerned, others go mad about them as well.

                  Andy

                  • dusk arising

                    I'm definitely a garibaldi ..... full of dead flies

                    • Goldfinch60

                      Those flies can be quite tasty!

                      • Poetic Dan

                        Delivery for Thursday Andy! Could do with going extra mad...

                      • Poetic Dan

                        Can't believe I had to wait till the need for my biscuit.... It was like, Jesus c..... At last.

                        I had a good chuckle to this, brilliant flow start to end.

                        • Saxon Crow

                          Cheers Dan. It was heaven sent clearly!

                        • PoeticBiscuit

                          Nothing wrong with being a biscuit! Who knew a biscuit could have such great writing ability?

                          • Saxon Crow

                            Just jammie i guess!

                          • ANGELA & BRIAN

                            HI *SC* - Angela HERE - Good evening - thanks for sharing your BISCUIT ! Lovely qualities to raise our Spirits - Sensible - Emphatic - Loopy & Laffing & Talking Waffle - WICKED ! Lovely poem & crisp as a Ginger Biscuit (my fave) they never go soggy and fall in the cup - when you dip them in your Lady Grey TEA ! Thank you for sharing.

                            Love - Joy & Peace to You & Yours
                            Angela & Brian ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿค๐Ÿ’™๐Ÿค๐Ÿงก

                          • Goldfinch60

                            Good fun write SC, I hope you enjoy your biscuits.

                            Andy

                          • tundrol

                            Make up your mind: a waffle or a biscuit? I think you sum it up for everybody.

                            • Saxon Crow

                              Haha. Well sometimes in life you have juat got to be both!



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